tale told by a lover
tale told by a lover Lyrics & Chords
hi people. first of all thanks for listening to my song.
actually this song aint complete yet. i purposely post it so that i can have your comment about it. i know there are things need to be improved and so i need you guys. i’m just 15 and the fact that i still naive about composing a song makes me want to learn more and again, i need your professional commentary. for sure i’ll appreciate every correction/lesson you’ll be giving me.
we can have a contact through email and here’s mine;
fret.player202@hotmail.com
thanks listener,
Aim and Tell
i cant stop the fire,
from burning all the smile,
that had given to you
im sitting here idle
reminisce the color,
that once given to you.
chorus;
i know,
we could never be together
you said,
we could be more than forever,
how can i forgive just to make you pleased?
you’re just a tale told by a lover
im losing my direction,
im losing those precautions,
well my weakness is your gone,
im counting all the nights,
where i couldn’t sleep so well
cause i know i’d wake up alone
[chorus]
head down a tear keeps fall apart,
im faking a smile just to make you feel alright,
while deep inside i wanna cry.
chorus.
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December 01, 2008
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Prateek Dayal
said
The guitaring is awesome … I think you may have to work a bit more on the lyrics. Not easy to relate to them in the current form. The last stanza is good.
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