Beyond the Stars - Original Composition

Beyond the Stars - Original... Lyrics & Chords

Beyond the stars

Coming out in the open space
Staring aimlessly at the sky
I feel the fresh air on my face
I wish I had wings to fly

Want to touch the depth of oceans
Want to look beyond the stars
Drink in a gulp the love potion
Catch each moment even it is far

I feel the best is coming now
Welcoming the worse along
Don’t ask what, why and how
Live each day to reach the stars and beyond

Lyrics – Mitushi Kapoor
Music & Vocals – Sumit Rai

Thanks for listening :)

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Sanjeeb

Sanjeeb Sircar said

Good tune and lyrics also.
The guitar could be tuned a little more.
The style brought some of Bob Dylan to mind.
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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Sanjeeb :)
I’m sure the guitar can be tuned better :)
bob dylan is one of people i’ve been inspired by :)
Regards

Sumit

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Ashish Mehndiratta said

nice little composition:)

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Sumit Rai said

@srividya : Thanks for appreciating the lyrics and singing :)

@Ashish : Thanks buddy for appreciating the composition :) . thanks for giving 5 stars :)

Regards
Sumit

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Shashank Gokhale said

Nice Riff…. :)

I loved the Composition a lot….

Lyrics are the heart of your song….:D Nice job by lyricist…

Come on man….Go for more….Don’t wait long….

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Shashank :) Glad you liked the composition :)
True, Lyrics are really beautiful :)
I’ve been a bit busy lately :) but planning to spend more time in future :)

Regards,
Sumit

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Abhishek Narayan said

This was excellent Sumit, anything coming out from within is so exhilarating, u’ll appreciate this more. I love originals! Keep on buddy !

Do listen to – Tum Ho Toh (Rock On Cover) – Parnters In Rhyme

~ Play the music, not the instrument.

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Sumit Rai said

Hey Abhi !! … thanks for listening :) , its been long time since i’ve heard from you.
Glad you like it :) . Will try to post more originals for you :)

Regards,
Sumit

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Nithya Muziboo staff said

nice….May be I shud request some covers from you!

Listen to Obicna djecija pjesma
Cheers,
Nithya

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Nithya :)
Which cover should i do :)

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Sudeip Ghosh said

Sumit…this was awesome…like sanjeeb said…u did make it sound more like Bob Dylan

try putting in a little variation…something like how the beginning of “United we Stand” is !but great stuff….you should definitely do more originals

what guitars are you using and what are you recording with?


~ Muziboo…get an audience…BECOME A STAR !!!

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Sumit Rai said

Hey Sudeip :) i have always thought of you as one who gives really helpful comments. I’m realy thankful to you :)
I’ll definitely check up united we stand and try to incorporate variations in future compositions :)

my guitar is hobner and i record on my laptop . i have tried adobe audition and audacity for recordings. somehow i think there’s nothing wrong in recording with audacity :). what do you record with ?

Regards,
Sumit

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George Kuruvilla Pro user said

Nice simple composition Sumit. Simple hook and totally hummable. Its nice to see you collaborate and make original music. Like Sudeip said, since this is a simple composition, try to make subtle variations when u sing the stanzas. Keep up the good work! 5/5 from me.

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Sumit Rai said

Hey :) thanks buddy :) i was beginning to wonder why you were not listening to my songs anymore :)… do you remember … the touch me song by me …. you were the first ever person to comment on my song on muziboo :) since then its been like so much time and so much what i’ve improved into… is because of your guidance :) … thanks bbye

Regards
Sumit

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Sudeip Ghosh said

i live , eat and play with Audacity
i have cubase but i have no idea how to use it
the problem i really have is…there is only sooo much i want to do with Technology !
call me a little old fashioned….

i definitely like to MIX my stuff using computers but beyond that i dont like to infuse anything computerised
Most of my songs also incorporate tonal arpeggios but even these i play them live while recording them. I refrain from creating loops and so on.

My School of thought is generally you have to make music that can be played live ! so be it a keyboard piece or guitars.

I am quite lazy to sit down and go through all the stuff thats there in the software. Ever since i learnt how to play keyboards and guitars i have really stuck to those single instruments…my equipment is really like 10 – 12 years old and trust me i have done a Ph.D on them ! lol….ne ways having said its a constant struggle to try to keep “upgrading” your sound your software !
throw in a full time job and thats it…all you want to do is just play and care less what equipment you are using…know what i mean ?

anyways …thats my 2 cents on integrating technology and music (if you choose to play that Live!)


~ Muziboo…get an audience…BECOME A STAR !!!

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Sumit Rai said

Wow thanks for sharing all that info with me :) . I have always thought best things come in small packages :) and also best things are for free :) atleast what i’ve said applies to audacity :) . it certainly would have been great if all songs were made of four chords and still sound great and dinstinct. a part of this is also true :) . I really dont like too much of technology myself when it comes to music , some of the best musicians ever were just using a guitar or a piano :) and some not even that :)

Regards
Sumit


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by Sumit Rai

February 22, 2009

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