Ami je Tomar -Bhool Bhulaiyya

Murali Ramanathan said

Meena….you have done a decent job on this song. Your swarasthanams are all fine…Your voice is good…What I feel is that when you render sangathis, especially ones which are bit complicated, you loose control. And sometimes it seems to be not fallng in the correct notes.It seems like you hurry bit there….You nee to be careful in those places. Then I think you need to improve the recording quality…

Warm Regards,
Murali Ram

Srujana Nadella said

Very nice rendition of the song….good going

Rahul (getting back to routine) said

very sweet voice u have got there…….i love the bengali lyrics in this song, the first couple of lines….they are just beautiful……u have very good control of notes, modulations were good and weak at places….the last aaalaap in the mukhda could be better, i know its the toughest place to sing in the song……

diction is one place u can improve A LOT……

but overall this is a very tough song to attempt and i applaud ur effort……apart from that u also sang the male parts…….very brave…….i loved it……

Regards,
Rahul/AJ

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Srini S (bye bye friends) said

Really a tough song.did a great job.mixing could b
better.all the best n keep practising.sing more song
s.

srinivasan.s

Mohammed Ashraf said

Hindi version of our own “oru murai vanthu paarthaya” from Manichithrathazhu (not talking abt the tune, but the situation!). It’s a real test for the singers and u r upto the marks.

Enjoyed a lot……

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Mohammed Ashraf said

Hmmmm….great to have good singers amoung your friends. I think it helps a lot.

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Vamsi Nadella said

Meena Garu,

Very tough song andi….You did great……excellent….especially….the last sangathis….i was feeling out of breath while listening to you….One thing is why did you do the sangathis and the aalap? You should have left the male vocals in the sangathis for the jugalbandhi and then should have sang all the male sangathis @ the end. The reason i’m saying this is….since you sang everything (and twice at many times) it looked like you were rushing into things rather than you enjoying the swaras….Just My 2 cents,

Hearty appreciation for attempting this and doing great.

The recording as many suggested, made your voice very muffled….Rest everything seems great.,….5/5 from me.

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Arvind R said

Thanks for inviting me to comment on this song … much appreciated.

Very nice semi classical nicely composed. Seems like Raaga Bilawal in Hindustani … I could be wrong.

The track has lost dynamics as it seems to have been stripped of the original vocal using software. So it has lost a lot of frequencies and this is the danger when you strip vocals. A lot of tones are lost and seems a bit unnatural.

You have sung well but what I have noted is the following:
- you still have reverb issues, you voice is too coloured.
- in medium to fast phrases your endings are not properly finished….you leave it a bit unfinished as you are keen in starting the next line. This makes it sound pitchy.
- Lastly, you seem to be pitchy in some embellishments which needs more practice.

Otherwise you seem to sing well, but I am not able to fully appreciate it because of the colouration in your voice due to reverb and effects … needs to be much more transparent.

Cheers and please take these in the positive sense. Good effort no doubt.

Kumaran said

This is a brave effort Meena, I have heard this covered by Srividya earlier. Wonderful effort, recording could be improved a lot, swarams were fantastically done!!!

Sindhuja Bhakthavatsalam (no longer active on muziboo- pl visit me at http://octaves.blogspot.com) said

Hi Meena, nice one although your sangathis are a little different from the ones in the original, which is fine. But as Murali pointed out, they seem to lack stability. Also, pronunciation could be better. A little more energy and peppiness would make it sound even better!
Overall, a very tough song and you’ve done a good job. Swaras very well done! (The MMGGSSNN is off pitch- but for that swaras were very good)
But I do realise, its very easy to point out flaws. You have indeed done a very good job! Really enjoyed the swaras followed by aalaaps at the end.

Best
Sindhuja

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Shyam Sundar said

There is an innocence in this rendition.Sweet!

αнмε∂ Khan said

A typical Shreya Ji rendition…
Meena Ji u av a very good control in your voice :)
The way sherya sang specially “Harkatain” is not a joke to sing…
I’m impress that you attempted it but you can sing more better….I’m sure after this classy n tuff rendition you got new experiences :)
Good Luck! (y) :)

Mirized Kapadia said

Hi Meena!! This was quite good……I liked it!!
Can u please tell me how you made the karaoke version/backing track of this song?? I would really love to make one for myself or if you have it can you please mail me a copy of the backing track file??
Thanks. :)

Vikrant Srivastava said

really very nice voice ……. but at some nodes u r deviating frm originals …but good try ….keep it up

Sohel Haque said

i am looking for this song long time
great song

Yogesh Bhatt said

Nice attempt.Very good voice ,singing is also very good.Rendered in a very magnificent way.Liked it…………Kindly give your valuable comments for my latest yaad na jaaye,or any other songs whatever you like.Thanks a lot and regards.
Yogesh Bhatt.

Ag said

Very nicely recorded karaoke. I love the song in your voice !

Dr Alok Gupta

Ramanie said

I am not Hindi but Honestly song (Ami je Tomar and Suniyo ji) the great voice sing by Lata,Sherya Ghospal and Anwesha…so sweet…God Bless You

Ajeesh Kakkarath said

….really good work…chechee…
hindi diction could have been better……
…
….still…the complete feel is there……

Dc said

lier…… this is a bengali song… ok and u hav not recorded this….

Shawon said

Ami jodi Amar Valobhar manushtikey gaye shonatey partam,ah mising somuch joy………….ah…ah

Akruti said

Very nice …. you have great voice !!!! beautifully sang.
Can you pleas tell me where can I find the music karaoke for hindi songs…. like this quality of yours for Ami je Tomar
Please help me with

Soumikghosh said

a long awaited search ……… such a nice composition ……… worth for remembrance …….the audio sparkle with glitters of raag, taal,tamak,& jawab ……… what a superb blend of life with music…………

Sohag Mia (will be back soon!) said

OMG! Really wonderful! In my favorite list………………….
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