I Had A Dream (Original Composition by Anirudh)

I Had A Dream (Original Com... Lyrics & Chords

Anirudh is a very talented musician here at Muziboo. I want to thank him for giving me an opportunity to sing this beautiful composition!

I was really skeptical about it because I have never sung an English song before! This is also my first attempt at an original composition and so it makes it very special :-) Thanks a lot Anirudh!!!

Looking forward to your feedback!

Lyrics:

I had a dream of walking down the beach with you beside me – 2 times

Oh what a perfect picture it was
star diamond studded sky our roof
scent of the breeze with the scent of the sea
golden sand , with our footsteps engraved…

I been waiting that this dream come to truth , I’ve been waiting – 2times

Oh what a perfect picture it was
star diamond studded sky our roof
scent of the breeze with the scent of the sea
golden sand , with our footsteps engraved…

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Anirudh Ks said

I should thank Smitha for brining life into this track :) with all the harmony and vocals.

I am very happy you have delivered beyond my expectation. Your first attempt is a big success.

looking forward to work many more projects with you…

“Music is a universal Language”
and I am proud to be a part of it :)

Cheers
Anirudh

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Neha ........ said

Already commented on Anirudh’s block ,
but let me echo my words,,
Smitha this is simply Fantabulous…! Your voice sounds as fresh as a blossoming flower, and so does Anirudh’s composition!
5/5 amazing teamwork guys! :)

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Anup said

very nice effort Anirudh and Smitha….enjoyed it….

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Harshan (away) Nambiar Pro user said

Very Impressive Smitha for your first original song. Kudos to Anirudh for this nice soothing composition….really liked it very much.

5/5 from me.
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Vijay (away...) Iyer said

kudos Anirudh and Smitha,

Beautiful composition….could feel my wet feet on the beach…. lol

Coming to singing….Smitha, pronunciation could be clearer. Very nice effort for the first time singing.

Keep up the good job!
Regards,

Vijay

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Rashmi Nair Pro user said

Nicely rendered, Smitha.
Very nice composition, Anirudh. The sound of the waves gave a very soothing touch to the song.
Good job!
Rashmi

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Sushane Shankar said

Its beautiful……
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Uthra said

Anirudha: Nice composition.

Smitha:
Very good for a first attempt. Keep singing.

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Krishnan N v said

Good one by Anirudh. Well sung by you, Smitha…

All the best…

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Nandita said

Good job you both. Enjoyed it. Smitha: I could sense that you were a little bit conscious singing an English song. You are sounding good so don’t be hesitant at all. A little bit more confidence will enhance it even further :)

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Smitha Passanha said

Thanks so much everyone for listening. Appreciate all the feedback! Really glad u all liked it :-)

- Smitha

Do listen to Kya Dekhte Ho – Duet with Pradip Somasundaran

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Subbu said

cool effort Anirudh and Smitha……enjoyed listening….Are male backing vocals by you Anirudh?
Regards,
Subbu.
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Radhika Nair (away) said

Anirudh & Smitha – great work from both of you!

Anirudh – nice and very soothing composition, Congrats!

Smitha – nicely sung.Sounded great for a first time attempt!

5 from me.

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Ramya Harish said

Well sung Smitha, I guess George is the best person to comment on this! It was a nice melody Anirudh, some portions sounded lil repetitive. Agree with rashmi, sound of waves were pleasant to the ears.

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Cheers:)
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George Kuruvilla Pro user said

Good job guys. Let me break try and be as objective as I can:

Anirudh – Had a very MLTR/Westlife sorta feel to it. What do you use for composing? Reason/FruityLoops? Did you play the guitar portions? The waves were good, but felt it did not have to be there for the entire length of the song.

Smitha – First of all, really glad you took this on and challenged yourself! I am going to give you some pointers for future renditions:

1. You sounded a little nervous in this. Not as confident as when you sing Asha Bhosle numbers.

2. As you went into line "Oh what a perfect picture it was ……… ", it sounded like reciting a rhyme as it didnt flow well. You could have experimented a bit there, tried some variations etc.

3. All through, the singing sounded controlled. Again from “Oh what a perfect picture…” you should have just let go and sung your heart out.

4. Your sounded nasal in this, more than usual. Not sure why. Something you need to watch out for.

5. The landing notes for each line seem to be extended. You should consider mixing it up with some staccatto too. I think it will break the repetition then.

Once again, these are just points for further improvement. You both have done a commendable job on this :)
-George
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Smitha Passanha said

Thanks everyone! All pointers for improvement noted.

George – Thanks for the detailed feedback! U r right about me being not confident :-) Also, I did not think about improvisations, sang it the way it was composed. That’s mainly because I am not confident enough to improvise at this point. Hope to get better. All these suggestions will definitely help in the future! So thanks a ton!

- Smitha

Do listen to Kya Dekhte Ho – Duet with Pradip Somasundaran

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Tara Balakrishnan said

Anirudh good one. Smitha liked ur tone and singing but felt words lacked clarity. the arrangement of words cud havebeen better…just my thought… over all very nice effort!

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Anirudh Ks said

Thanks for the complete analysis :) george .

I use most of compositions using my Keyboard and FL studio.
But this song was entirely done on my keyboard . the guitar was played on the keyboard itself – using super articulation :)
“Music is a universal Language”
and I am proud to be a part of it :)

Cheers
Anirudh

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George Kuruvilla Pro user said

Great job with the Guitar Piece Anirudh. I really liked it. Sounded quite authentic.
-George
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Kumar Srinivasan Pro user said

Awesome effort Smitha for your first original song. You have sung it very melodiously.

Nice composition Anurudh. Enjoyed it very much.

Clarity of lyrics could be better.

Look forward to more.

-Kumar.

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Bodhisattva Dasgupta Pro user said

Brilliant composition, Anirudh…. very very melodious and soothing…… the waves, though, were okay till the vocals started…. and you could have got them back in the end, maybe…. just a thought….

Smitha…. you got a great voice…. no need to say that again… :) but here, you were a bit nervous… i guess due to the fact that you had not sung an english number before (as you mentioned)… and thus, i guess, at times… your strains reflected a bit of eastern touches….

but overall, it sounded really nice and soothing…. and am definite and sure that you will pull off your next english songs with much more ease….

and once again… you have a veryyy sweet voice… :)

Regards,
Bodhi

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Srini S (bye bye friends) Pro user said

hey smitha appreciate ur first attempt.I loved it,v
ery expressive.keep it up.Anirudh is a great comp
oser, especially loved the water fx,lol.

u were bit nervous in the begining,but made it in th
e stanzas.Its not easy to sing a new song,but u ha
ve made it.All the best n keep them coming.U deserv
e full marks.Enjoy singing.
srinivasan.s

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Smitha Passanha said

Tara, Kumar, Bodhi, Srini – Thanks a lot!

Bodhi – Thanks for favoriting it!

- Smitha

Do listen to Kya Dekhte Ho – Duet with Pradip Somasundaran

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Meera Manohar Pro user said

I liked the waves sound :D

Anirudh: Very pleasant composition

Smitha: Kudos on trying out your first English number. Hope you get to do more of them in the future!

It sounded pleasant, will not go into nuances and language appropriate pointers, for already given by stalwarts upstairs :)

Cheers,

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Mohamed Niaz said

I liked the mield and soft music sound,is very memory pleasant composition .

e fully enjoyed very much.

mixing is good.

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Shampak Chakravorty said

Hi Smaitha!!!
Very very nice song….really very beautiful…… Its surely felt as a Dream Song alright…… Excellent work by both of you…. You voice sounded like a charm…. N Anirudh……wonderful composition…… I didnot find any lacks in confidence though….instead I felt an accent issue with it which might have been the real problem. Though that will go away with a lil practice. Apart from that very very very beatiful….

Regards,
Shampak.

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Vaishali said

Liked this composition! Well sung by you, Smitha.
You do sound a bit hesitant but that’ll go away as you do more such numbers…no big deal, and you sound really good, as always.
Keep singing!

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Neil Swanson..(collaborations welcomed.singers wanted) Pro user said

HI SMITHA
GOD BLESS…great song i do agree with george
but a fabulous job on this song . THIS SONG
HAS GREAT POTENTIAL….LOVED THE SOUND EFFECTS
the waves and background guitar harmonies.were
beautifull//MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR MUSIC
in CHRIST NEIL SWANSON

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by Smitha Passanha

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