Tasweer Dil Mein - Composition Shashank Gokhale

Prateek Dayal said

Nice composition Shashank. You certainly do sad compositions well :)
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Ronak R. said

Hey shashank… this is really awesome. Why don’t you add some bass and strings/pads and a lil’ bit of beats? You may create a separate track for that…

You generate wonderful tracks using deep feelings…

I’m a fan… ;)

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Dhiraj Barla said

Man you got a great talent, lyrics were awesome.

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I like this part very much, a very soothing composition and it flows like cool breeze. I felt the emotions in your singing, great job dude, keep up the good work.

Nithya said

Very nice. As Ronak says adding a few more tracks will complete this! Same with tujse yun
Cheers
Nithya

Radhakrishnan Nair said

Great stuff Shashank. Lyrics too is excellent…

“Dayaro mein ho kar khade, jee rahe hai
Ankho ki boondo ko hi pee rahe hai… "

Keep up the good work.

Prithvi said

there can b only word for this Shashank….beautiful….u got the feel just rt….beautiful….may b u shud add some more tracks as others suggested 2 give it a more complete feel….even tho i like it just as it is…:)

Sudeip Ghosh said

Awesome very nice !!
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Abhay Kulkarni said

Hey Shashank,
This is a good one, sounds touching specially with reference to the background created in your write up. The lyrics and the musical composition go hand in hand and compliment eachother. Why don’t you try and get such beautifull compositions sung from somebody with good vocal aptitude.
Keep going mate.
Abhay

Shailender (kabhi on kabhi off) said

Wah Shashank, these are the only words that come to mouth when listening to this composition……

Add a little more reverbrations and echo…….and the effect will increase manifold

Harshan Nambiar said

Very nice composition ….and great singing effort too…. :-)

Hemant Badya said

Wow, loved it. I love sad songs, and this one is a special composition. Would love to try it in my voice, could you please send me the track?

Adithi said

Nice one….Enjoyed that! Brought out a lovely melancholic feel!

Krishnan N v said

Hi Shashank….

Undoubtedly a very good composition….Sounding like you got inspired by many old songs like ‘mera to jo bhi kadam…." from Dosti, ’hume tumse pyaar kitna’ from Kudrat etc., …It could be coincidental….

The beauty of the composition is not really coming out, as stated by others, due to not-so-good singing. And about the music I do agree any extra music will surely be nice….but even the simple one which you have now played is also sounding very good…

Get it recorded again with a good singer….it will be wonderful…

It is high time you go into composing full time….you have IT in you….:D

Best wishes

N V K
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Vishal Khaparde said

Very soulful and touching composition…Loved it …You can play guitar, compose songs, sing and write lyrics too …wow …Some are born with one talent and you are blessed with many ! …Keep it up …:)

Constructive feedback : While composing a tune around words, try not to break them …I feel it could be avoided here……“Aasamaan bhi SAA — GAR se milne ko aaya” :)

Cheers,
-Vishal

Sachin Olkar said

the use of komal dhaivat adds a good feel to bring out melancholy-u must do this number yet again with a proper vocalist not just with the voice aptitude but someone with a bit of classical background as the use of komal dhaivat (resonance and freqeuncy)in the song will have a significant impact in the ‘just’ scale rather than the tempered scale. tempered scale great for harmony-just scale superb for melancholy-will be great to see u do this with some indian string instruments and bamboo flute use specifically for the notes “ga re sa dha” in avaroh
keep it up

Sachin Olkar said

shashank -enjoyed the tune and being a bit passionate made the above suggestions. hope u find them worth considering

Aditya Bedekar said

very beautiful composition shashank!

Gaurav Bhargava said

sahi hai……good stuff :)

Rakesh Baro said

buddy you are a great composer, it will be better if u let a good singer lend his/her voice to your composition, who can do justice to your compositions……………great music composers got their due when they let good singers let sing their compositions…like Pancham da, Rajesh Roshan,……AR Rahman is an exception though :)

A.k.a Ali said

Well no surprise ur father loved this one it is a classic reminds me of some old classical era of Indian Music awesome gr8 simple music & awesome vocals.

Sudhanshu Gaur said

hello sir….
wow….the composition is impeccable……lyrics is also awesum….yeah,singing is not dat gr88 as told by others….but still,it was really nice 2 hear dis song….u brought out a touching feel in d song….no wonder,y ur dad liked it d most….it deserves 2 b 1 of ur masterpieces….
i really wanna hear dis song by sonu niigaam……d song wuld becum out of d world….he can bring d best out of dis song….
as NVK sir said,u shuld go in2 composing full tym….it wuld b gr88….truly…

Ramya Harish said

hi… i just loved this composition… good feel thruout the song…kudos to ur singing attempt…
Cheers:)
Ramya

Srividya Kasturi said

Nice composition, Shashank…:) A sad feel to the song, nicely brought out…

Thankyou for listening and leaving a f/b on my song:)
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Fazal Khan said

I dunno wat 2 say……
m speechless….
This song wont get out of ma head…….
Lyrics were Beautiful…(unimaginable)(exclnt)
The unusual Major Minor Combination created the sad atmosphere….
n this song can really make a person cry…
m not judging ur composition…. coz composition of this level cudnt be judged by a kid….
Man!!! i neva felt this way bfore….
I hv to bunk my coachin n meet my gf 2moro….
Too gud…
My favourite……
I M UR FAN!!!!!!
what do i do now?
i cant sleep 2nite…… its 4 in d mornin….
AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

Fazal 17

Ravi Sundaran said

Not sure….but sounds like this one is inspired from the song from the film Imaandaar…. Aur is dil mein kya rakha hai……

Still can’t take anything away from the combination of the lyrics and the music….