Meri Jane Jana - Composition by Shashank

Harshan Nambiar said

I guess I am the first one to comment …a bit scary :-)

To shashank the singer : Your voice sounds very good on the upper scale. some flat notes Aankhon hi Ankhon me ….other than this I felt you were pretty good. I loved the simplicity of the mix as well.

Shashank the composer : Very nice and catchy tune With just the guitar for arrangement is a great thing by itself. I loved the strings before the song took off…

Enjoyed it ….I can imagine how this would unfold with a piano, a drum set along with zillions of other instrument….and with all the other effects.

Great job buddy ….keep the creative juice flowing :-)

Prem j Hans said

Hi Shashank!
Guitar Sounds very Good and so the composition… It has come out in a very tuneful manner. Definitely when arranged with other instruments, this song gonna really rock. Wud luv to hear the final mix if u r taking it a level ahead :)……5/5 for this awesome piece.

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Srividya Kasturi said

Loved the Guitar on this…
Nice tune Shashank…!
—Vidya

Dhiraj Barla said

Sashank, first of all I liked your voice in this composition of yours. And also I like the simple arrangments, I don’t want to add any new instrument to it, just let it be like this simple and sweet.

Abhilasha Ojha said

nice shashank, can just imagine more volume on this song; chorus, harmonies, etc…. it’s an empty canvas on which a lot of colour can — and needs to — be added…. you’ve given a nice structure to the lines…. congrats

Tara Balakrishnan said

Nice tune Shashank….

Krishnan N v said

Shashank….

Very good composition as anticipated…Great on the guitar….Singing not upto the mark as usual….:D

I felt you need to open up. You were doing a very controlled singing.

I agree with Dhiraj….do not add more instruments to this composition….It sounds too good with just guitar….

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Radhakrishnan Nair said

Shashank,

Loved the guitar part. It was excellent, I too would love it the way it is without adding any more instruments. Great job!

RK

Rakesh Baro said

Since you yourself said your not a singer so I would abstain from commenting on your singing……

I liked your voice…. the song and guitar sounded nice, feel was nice……keep it up Shashank…will give 5/5 for the composition ……
Guitar sunte hi Kishoreji ke hazaar gaane yaad aa jaate hain…we used to have mahfil of Guitar and Kishoreji’s songs when i was doing my grad ….i wish I could play guitar ….

Tariq Mehmood said

grip on vocals is little bit weak but speciality is that there is a sweetness in ur tone, so peace i find to hear ur comps

Adwait Ranade (away..busy mode....) said

Hi Shashank,
Wonderful- mutually complimentary composition and lyrics. Nice feel thro’out. You have nice voice too and I enjoyed your rendition.
Your experience during this creation reminds me of similar experience of Baa.Bha.Borkar, Marathi poet….
Cheers,
Adwait Ranade

Nitin Dubey said

Shashank – nice and catchy tune. I thought the lyrics were a little cliched, but (though you are not a singer) your singing imparted a certain feel to this song. And the second guitar doing the licks was very helpful.

The chord between ‘har pal ajeeb hai’ and ‘aur lambi raat hai mera dil’ was a little out of place I felt. It could have been a conscious attempt towards dissonance, but the first few times I heard it, it sounded like a mistake. On repeated hearing I could sense that it was intentional, but it sounded ‘out of scale’ to me. Never mind, small thing :)

Keep it up bro….I agree with you – Creativity is just a state of mind :)

Sudeip Ghosh said

very nice….did u play 2 guitars…i m assuming so rite? the solo and rythm ? good stuff
great composition !!!

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Nithin Lopez said

a hauntin voice buddy….carry on…nd kudos to de composition….hope to hear more from u
nd worthy mentionin de guitar parts ….excellent….

Anand M said

Very Nicee Shashank ji!Great composition n Great Singing 2…Full Orchestra aur Studio Effects ke sath toh ye Aur Lajawab hota…Great Great Job Dear:)

Nitin Sawant said

hey hi! greaaaat stuuuuuff……
very catchy tune…
I liked the way you hv sung “mera dil” I liked the offbeat part in it. I hv added it in my fav list:)! and guitar hormonies r sweet, addin to the song! keep postin!

Fazal Khan said

The Composition Is Awesome!
The Guitar Was very gud…

No other instruments are required….
I love the “acoustic feel” of the song!!!

I even Liked your voice…. Its very different… sounds very casual… cool….
Why dont you Try Kabhi Kabhi Aditi…… That song is meant for you… It wud sound great with you on vox…
Once Again…. The composition Was Beautiful….
Guitar Was Just gr8….
Keep Rockin’

Fazal 17

Vaibhav Ekbote said

Shashank sir, i agree with Fazal – you should kabhi kabhi aditi…
about this song…simple yet catchy, nice composition…

-vaibhav

Mamta Swastik said

simply gr88……

Pratibha Rajan said

I guess i am late by an year, but, i loved the composition!!! its simple yet so soulful and youthful…… only one word – “awesome” composition!!!

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Chandrakant (away for counselling stage shows) said

Shashank ji, First time on your page. I liked your performance by all means. Singer, Composer, Guitarist…. Great feel in the whole thing. Now as Harshanji suggested, I also would suggest you to develop this with more instrument though whatever you have done has a class of its own. Awaiting many more compositions from you.
“I sing like I feel”. ….Chandrakant Page