Inteha Ho Gayi - (Teaser by RANJIT) with Sagar on the guitar.

Hi Ranjit,

Good, expressive singing, uncomplicated guitar playing and, from what I heard, appropriate chords and chord changes.

I assume that you might be open to improving this version based on the feedback you agree with.

1. Tempo: Maybe a faster tempo (closer to the original) could impart more energy

2. Mixing: The guitar could have more presence and would ideally be panned (stereo image) with the voice mono in the centre, instead of the whole thing being mono.

3. Diction (suggested correction in italics): Aayi na kuchh khabar, phir wajah kya hui (and not fir), saath saath woh hai mere gham mein (and not gum, GHam is a guttural sound)

4. Lyrics: The correct lyrics for the antara are: baat jo hai usme baat woh yahaan nahin kaheen kisi mein….

Hope this helps, this is entirely my personal opinion but this is what I’d suggest if you’re looking to do a full version of the song. I look forward to it :)

Regards
Nitin

Posted over 2 years ago

Ranjit Salian said

Thank you so much divine soul Nitin,

This is indeed a wonderful & perfect feedback for a teaser version which aims at improving the song to the core.

Yes, I am very open to such suggestions divine soul Nitin as part of my Learning Curve, as you complimented in the first place and then wanted us to maintain the good work by going that one step further to achieve a perfect rendition and mix.

I will fix the issues related to:
Tempo
Mixing
Diction
Lyrics

in the final version of the song with the finer aspects as mentioned by you.

This was just an ad-lib song so did not detail out much apart from the expressions. You have put light on the intricacies and we will surely do justice to that going forward.

Thank you again divine soul for your valuable time and constructive feedback.

It is an honor to receive compliments and constructive feedback from a COMPOSER like you.

God Bless You….

PLEASE DO LISTEN to my following 5 LATEST RENDITIONS and leave behind your valuable feedback and rating and if you love it then do make it part of your favorites:
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LATEST RENDITION’s:

1. SACRIFICE (Cover Version – Elton John by RANJIT)

2. SONIYE HIRIYE – (Punjabi Cover Version by RANJIT) with Sagar on the guitar

3. SABSE PEECHE HUM KHADE (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar

4. ANNIE’s SONG (John Denver Cover) – Dedicated to my Beloved Soulmate – My Wife

5. * SPECIAL:::> REFLECTION OF GOD (by Ranjit Mixed by Neil Swanson…) – Dedicated to Jesus Christ

WESTERN RENDITIONS:

1. Reflection of God ( Original Composition with Anirudh) – dedicated to God, My Soulmate, My Son and NavDurga Maata- Navrathri Special
2. Bring Him Home – Dedicated to my divine sister
3. In Christ Alone – Dedicated to Jesus Christ
4. Somewhere – Dedicated to Lord Krishna
5. When You Believe (in GOD) – Latest VERSION
Wonderful Tonight – by Eric Clapton
6. Unchained Melody – Air Supply – Graham Russel & Russel Hitchcock
7. Candle in the Wind – Elton John’s dedication to Princess Diana

HINDI RENDITIONS:

1. Sabse Peeche Hum Khade (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar
2. MAA – Taare Zameen Par – Neha’s Mixed Version
3. Yaadein
4. Kahin Toh – Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
5. Jeena Yahan Marna Yahaan – Mera Naam Joker
6. Musafir Hoon Yaaron – Kishore Da
7. Aaj Purani Raahon Se – Mohammad Rafi
8. Tujhse Naaraaz Nahi Zindagi

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Take Care divine soul,
Keep the faith always,
Live in surrender faith every moment in time,
Peace be with you,
God Bless You and your loved ones….

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GOD IS THE SOURCE of the all pervading COSMIC MUSIC and DIVINE VIBRATIONS in the INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS and our very own EXISTENCE of FINITE CONSCIOUSNESS…

Posted over 2 years ago

Ibolya Horváthné orbán -back to work but hope to sing soon! said

Ranjit
Maybe it seems strange to you…but I really would try this song-as it has deffinetly western touch and female part suits to my voice….Only that I will need help on diction ,of course.Sorry if I dare too much!
Ibolya

Posted over 2 years ago

Ajeesh Kumar said

Good one, Ranjit.
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Posted over 2 years ago

Thinkal govind kumar said

My Dear Ranjit,
Nice rendition in your great voice with lot of expressions !
You’ve to do the song with the full track which would be wonderful !
Hope to see the finished product soon !
Cheers !
GOD Bless !
Loving Best Wishes,
Thinkal Govind Kumar.

Posted over 2 years ago

Ranjit Salian said

Thank you so much divine soul Ibolya, divine soul Ajeesh and loved divine soul Thinkal Govind Kumar.

Divine Soul Ibolya:

Yes of course you can try this song. Let me know what help do you need. You can mail me at ranjitsalian@gmail.com

Divine soul Ajeesh:
Thank you indeed for acknowledging this effort.

Loved Divine soul Thinkal Govind Kumar:
I am so happy that you loved the rendition with expressions and you attribute my voice to be a great voice.
I am truly honored with a revered person like you gracing my block.
I will surely do it with the actual Karaoke Track as per your suggestion.
Cheers to you too,
Loving Best Wishes for you too,
God Bless You too….

God Bless You….

PLEASE DO LISTEN to my following 5 LATEST RENDITIONS and leave behind your valuable feedback and rating and if you love it then do make it part of your favorites:
################################################################

LATEST RENDITION’s:

1. SACRIFICE (Cover Version – Elton John by RANJIT)

2. SONIYE HIRIYE – (Punjabi Cover Version by RANJIT) with Sagar on the guitar

3. SABSE PEECHE HUM KHADE (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar

4. ANNIE’s SONG (John Denver Cover) – Dedicated to my Beloved Soulmate – My Wife

5. * SPECIAL:::> REFLECTION OF GOD (by Ranjit Mixed by Neil Swanson…) – Dedicated to Jesus Christ

WESTERN RENDITIONS:

1. Reflection of God ( Original Composition with Anirudh) – dedicated to God, My Soulmate, My Son and NavDurga Maata- Navrathri Special
2. Bring Him Home – Dedicated to my divine sister
3. In Christ Alone – Dedicated to Jesus Christ
4. Somewhere – Dedicated to Lord Krishna
5. When You Believe (in GOD) – Latest VERSION
Wonderful Tonight – by Eric Clapton
6. Unchained Melody – Air Supply – Graham Russel & Russel Hitchcock
7. Candle in the Wind – Elton John’s dedication to Princess Diana

HINDI RENDITIONS:

1. Sabse Peeche Hum Khade (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar
2. MAA – Taare Zameen Par – Neha’s Mixed Version
3. Yaadein
4. Kahin Toh – Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
5. Jeena Yahan Marna Yahaan – Mera Naam Joker
6. Musafir Hoon Yaaron – Kishore Da
7. Aaj Purani Raahon Se – Mohammad Rafi
8. Tujhse Naaraaz Nahi Zindagi

################################################################
Take Care divine soul,
Keep the faith always,
Live in surrender faith every moment in time,
Peace be with you,
God Bless You and your loved ones….

################################################
GOD IS THE SOURCE of the all pervading COSMIC MUSIC and DIVINE VIBRATIONS in the INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS and our very own EXISTENCE of FINITE CONSCIOUSNESS…

Posted over 2 years ago

Ibolya Horváthné orbán -back to work but hope to sing soon! said

Ranjeet!
It is a great honour for me to sing with you!I really hope that will be a nice attempt!
Ibolya

Posted over 2 years ago

Subhash David said

Hi Ranjit, Great voice and singing!!!
Please sing songs from Hariharan’s collection.
Your voice has the same timber.
Keep posting. Regards, Subhash

Posted over 2 years ago

Smitha Passanha said

Enjoyed this one Ranjit. Nicely sung! The diction issues have already been mentioned by Nitin. This is one of my favorite Asha-Kishore songs….so looking fwd to the full version :-) 5/5 for this one.

- Smitha

Do listen to:
Kuch Khaas Hai

Posted over 2 years ago

Ranjit Salian said

Divine soul Ibolya:

I am honored too. We will give it our best, then let the experts and our loved sisters and brothers on Muziboo comment.
God Bless You….

Divine soul Subhash:
Thank you so much divine soul.

Wowwww it is indeed an honor to get such wonderful compliments and feedback from you divine soul Subhash. I am so honored to be compared with great Hariharan with respect to the timber in my voice.
I will surely render songs from Hariharan’s collection very soon.
God Bless You….

Divine soul Smitha:
Thank you so much for your compliments and feedback. I love to get comments from you always, its something about this cheerful energy you emanate that I can feel right here.
I will surely take care of the diction issues
This is one of favorite songs too. You know while singing this song I had you in mind to collaborate with. As I feel when it comes to Ashaji’s song your voice texture is the closest to her on Muziboo.
I will work on the full version soon. Surely will miss you on this one. I had also spoken with Sree bro of collaborating with you around last week.

God Bless You….

Thank you for the rating too :-)

God Bless You….

PLEASE DO LISTEN to my following 5 LATEST RENDITIONS and leave behind your valuable feedback and rating and if you love it then do make it part of your favorites:
################################################################

LATEST RENDITION’s:

1. SACRIFICE (Cover Version – Elton John by RANJIT)

2. SONIYE HIRIYE – (Punjabi Cover Version by RANJIT) with Sagar on the guitar

3. SABSE PEECHE HUM KHADE (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar

4. ANNIE’s SONG (John Denver Cover) – Dedicated to my Beloved Soulmate – My Wife

5. * SPECIAL:::> REFLECTION OF GOD (by Ranjit Mixed by Neil Swanson…) – Dedicated to Jesus Christ

WESTERN RENDITIONS:

1. Reflection of God ( Original Composition with Anirudh) – dedicated to God, My Soulmate, My Son and NavDurga Maata- Navrathri Special
2. Bring Him Home – Dedicated to my divine sister
3. In Christ Alone – Dedicated to Jesus Christ
4. Somewhere – Dedicated to Lord Krishna
5. When You Believe (in GOD) – Latest VERSION
Wonderful Tonight – by Eric Clapton
6. Unchained Melody – Air Supply – Graham Russel & Russel Hitchcock
7. Candle in the Wind – Elton John’s dedication to Princess Diana

HINDI RENDITIONS:

1. Sabse Peeche Hum Khade (Acoustic Cover Version – Silk Route) with Sagar on the Guitar
2. MAA – Taare Zameen Par – Neha’s Mixed Version
3. Yaadein
4. Kahin Toh – Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
5. Jeena Yahan Marna Yahaan – Mera Naam Joker
6. Musafir Hoon Yaaron – Kishore Da
7. Aaj Purani Raahon Se – Mohammad Rafi
8. Tujhse Naaraaz Nahi Zindagi

################################################################
Take Care divine soul,
Keep the faith always,
Live in surrender faith every moment in time,
Peace be with you,
God Bless You and your loved ones….

################################################
GOD IS THE SOURCE of the all pervading COSMIC MUSIC and DIVINE VIBRATIONS in the INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS and our very own EXISTENCE of FINITE CONSCIOUSNESS…

Posted over 2 years ago

Khawer Khilji said

Hi Ranjit,

Nice attempt to cover this beautiful song. Thanks for the share.

My tribute to Legends

http://www.muziboo.com/01KK/music/beqarar-karke-humein-yun-na-jayae-aapko-0

Regds.

KK

Posted over 2 years ago

Yogesh Bhatt said

Hi Ranjit bhai,first time listening you.Very nice singing and magnificent voice.Nakhra and adaayen of Kishore da are very much liked by me.5/5 from me.Congrats. for singing so good and selecting such a marvellous song.Cheers.God bless you………Kindly spare some time for listening and giving valuable comments for my songs……The latest one is ,:sama hai suhaana suhaana.Some other songs are:kehna hai,zindagi ke safar mein,zindagi ke mod per,chaand jaane kahaan kho gaya,koi bataade dil hai jahaan,etc.
Yogesh Bhatt.

Posted over 2 years ago