First Time Tujhko

First Time Tujhko Lyrics & Chords

Hi there!
Guys first time I have dared to upload my vocals. This ones my new own composition, it took me more than a week to get it right.All samples(Strings,sax,bass,flute,Piano etc) used in this one was created on my Yamaha psr 290…I played it actually (beats apart).As far as vocals are Concerned I know its not up to the mark.I have to improve a lot. Guys please let me know what you think about this ….any corrections or flaws please mention it… Thanks You’ll

Lyrics goes this way….
First Time
Tujhko dekha
to yeh socha
aur yeh samjha

Your the one
I wanted
for my
whole Life

Cant you see
Mein deewana
tune nahin jaana
nahin jaana

I promise you
I will Love You
For my
whole life

First time
this is
First time

First time
this is
First time

First time
this is
First time

I swear.

Title : First Time
Composed by: PremJ Hans
Arranged By: PremJ Hans

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Krishnan N v said

I dont know the technicalities of arranging the music and all….But I loved it. It felt good….nice and trendy… Not able to comment on the lyrics as well.

I wish you had a longer version,…Thought it ended so soon and almost abruptly…:)

Keep up the good job…

N V K

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Shashank Gokhale said

I like th spirit that u tried a nice composition….

When it started I felt like GEORGE MICHAEL style of arrangment….:D ‘Careless Whisper’….:D

but as a composer I can only say that it has to mature a little bit more….:D

Arrangement is very nice but Compistion need more soul in it….But then its my openion…. :D

Keep composing….
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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Nvk sir:- thanks for your feed back …I’ll really make sure that with my next post onwards I’m having an extended full fledged song.

Shashank:- good bro! you commented on my post after such a long time……really happy to see your comments…i’ll improve my composition.
PremJ Hans…
My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Ronak R. said

Hi, I had to come and comment after reading your personalized scribble. :) Been busy lately, due to job at Satyam and lost in transition… you know, E=MC(sqaure)… forget it… Listening now…

Oh…. God, I hate this demos. :P hehe….

You know what, our imaginations seem to follow a bit similar path… if not exactly the same one.

Well, there are certain aspects easy to point out… like vocals can be compressed at points, more air shall be filled in, and the instruments can be more lively…. you know.

But the most important thing I gotta tell you is that this song shows how much potential lies inside you… and the likes…. (u know wat i mean… hehe… ;))

Nice to listen something new from you. Would like to help you in making it better, if at all I can. :)

Cheers….

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks Ronak! for such appreciation and encouragement…Definitely I wud love to learn how shud i make my stuff sound more lively…
PremJ Hans…
My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Soumitra Sarkar Pro user said

That sounded very nice :) loved the beats :)
- Soumitra

Pls listen to my Chingari attempt.
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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks Soumitra for listening to my stuff.
PremJ Hans…
My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Dhiraj Barla said

Agree with that it has George Michael feel to it, and the way you sang it too. Nice composition and arrangements there and above all i like the mixing. Keep up the good work bro.

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks Dhiraj for appreciating my stuff. This got possible only with my new Laptop…this one is the first composition outta it.

Thanks a lot guys…will definitely make sure with next upload…. my song is not sounding incomplete and I will really write meaningful lyrics and compose good numbers.
PremJ Hans…
My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Joseph Thomas said

Nice work Prem. I think with regards to the tones and arrangement etc, there is scope for improvement. But overall nice work!

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks Joe!…Point Noted and good to see your comments.One more Thing if its my Vocals how Should I improve it.What Shud I practice …do help me out guys.
PremJ Hans…
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Harshan Nambiar Pro user said

Loved the beginning and the beats …it was a nice attempt.

I would have liked to hear more variations in the tune….than having the same tune repeat.

You have a nice vocal tone ….you should sing more often.

Give you 4/5 for the creativity and arrangement .

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Pragyan Anand misra said

Hello Prem,

Really liked the tune!….good composition…would love to hear more full hindi songs….i think you should be more clearer on the diction part….music is very good!!
Pragyan Anand Misra

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Sreeharshan: good to see your comment and vote. I’m learning everyday on my own about how to get my stuff sound right.Will definitely keep this Variation Factor on my Mind for any new Uploads.

Pragyanji: Thanks for liking my composition…yes I’ll concentrate on Diction as well.
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My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Sudeip Ghosh said

Prem….i would totally second Shashank
i loved the “composition”
however keep working on it
the arrangement can definitely improve
and so the mix
the song has a retro feel to it
i dont know if that was intentional !!!

good stuff

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Sudeip Ghosh said

my rating 5/5

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Hi Sudeip!
thanks for your feedback…Nothing sort of a Retro I had in my mind…I just trusted my ears for the tune I created…may be the arrangement need some more inputs.
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My Latest Upload  First Time tujhko….

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Thinkal govind kumar Pro user said

My Dear Prem,
I just loved your beautiful creation.As rightly pointed out by our Dear NVK above, when we start enjoying this song, it abruptly ends. Yes, I agree with NVK that it should have been longer.
Hey Prem, why don’t you do a longer version. We all know that you can do it Buddy.
Full marks from me.
GOD Bless !
Loving Best Wishes,
Thinkal Govind Kumar.

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks! Thinkal for your comments .there’s some limitations related to my music making at present. Need to build up certain things to overcome the present process.
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Rahul (on and off a bit) Pro user said

brilliant stuff man….complete this song……we all would love to see this as a full version…….loved loved loved it……u have a lot of potential……hope u r following ur passion and talent in a bigger way……

Regards,
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Rinu Srinivasan said

whooaa….rockin!!

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Prem j Hans Pro user said

Thanks Rinu :)
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