Pain... (Improvised)

Pain... (Improvised) Lyrics & Chords

As Deepak said, the vox need to be more crisp and clear.

Even I felt so.

So, here it is again.

I also reverbed the beats and snares a li’l which might give a better feel!

The vox goes sumthing like:-

Krodeejay presents to you,
Pain, like never before.

This song goes out to all those people who’ve lost someone that they loved with all their heart….

….like I have.

I know she won’t come back to me ever again.

My heart still bleeds for her.

Damn….

I miss you girl….

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DJ Deepak said:-

First of all, I’m sorry to hear bout your gal mate…

I could feel the pain in this song… I had goose bumps cuz dude everyone has lost someone, somewhere in some way or the other!! So have I…

I know, it might not sound great to comment the following, but as I have seen you grow from good to a better DJ I had to say the following (I took a break to leave the emotions and listen to it technically)

  • The intro vox idea was cool… However, I thought it could have been a little crisp and clear… (It might be the encoding too)
  • I see that you have used a hip-hop snare patch on this one… Have you thought of a rock snare (as you have metal guitar in this song) with a good amount of reverb and delay??
  • Did you play the piano or use some loop?? It started pretty good… Chord progressions were nice… I just thought you should have continued it to bring it to the note of the song… May be another 2 notes or 4…

All said and done, I really liked this work… I need the good quality mp3 of this song… I’m sure you know what my email ID is, isn’t it?? Great work mate… Cheers… \m/

DJ
“Its all bout music and it always will be!”


DJ Deepak said:-

This song is fcukin addictive man!! Amazing mix… It goes into my favorites… Salute!!!

DJ
“Its all bout music and it always will be!”


Mustafa Musaji said:-

Nice!


Krodeejay said:-

Thanx Mustafa!

@ Deepak

THAAAAANK YOOOUUU !!!!

Those comments mean a lot to me!

Yes, I will turn things around with those tips you gave me!

I’ll just make the initial vox a li’l clear and
put up another upload!

And about the addiction, you bet it is so!!!

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Sudeip Ghosh said

great stuff ! great feel…i love the new age sound…the drums….so i am guessing the mix is on an original song…though i feel the guy who sang the original is a little off….like +20 cents down or something….awesome mix !!

once again…need to understand the target audience for this mix…sounded more like a lounge feel to me…so if thats what u wanted to do …great stuff !

loved it
keep em coming
i ll rate it 4.5 / 5 becos the original singer is off scale

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Krawdeejay™ - d@ ev0luti0n said

Thanx Sudeip!

Yes it was supposed to give a loungish feel!

Dunno wot the singer did tho!

It’s 4m the movie Awarapan!

Thanx 1nce again!

My latest uploads:-

Pain….

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Ronak R. said

WOW.

Great mash-up. Liked the way you used Rabba [Musafir] piano in a reduced tempo. Mixed quite well.

Man, this piano sounds so amazing.

Bass appears to be terribly great. Not sure about snares & hi-hats though…

Overall, a near-perfect job.

Must not, and won’t be able to, comment on the emotional aspect…. coz….

I’m Not In Love…. [coming soon] :)

My Latest Upload – Addicted

~ Ronak R. / RokZRooM

Music – My Beloved Obsession!

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Krawdeejay™ - d@ ev0luti0n said

thanx alot!
My latest uploads:-

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In Love

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