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This one is a karoke done with the background score Sumit supplied in his Arena: Task 01 ….

So this one goes out to Sumit, Geniusoid and Nithya (who insisted that I do this)

I can see only one good thing coming out of this one. This should motivate more people to upload and lower the barrier to entry :)

Must say this is a difficult one to upload … I was running out of breath on every 2nd line :(

Do let me know whats wrong apart from timing, pitch and lack of energy :)

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Nithya Muziboo staff said

Cool man…i am impressed:)

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Ashwini Mk said

Gud goin … man u sing really well… y don’t u try singing for a profession… u r awesome….

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Nithya Muziboo staff said

Well, it can be improved..but for what i know of you, its pretty good :)

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Vikram Js said

nice work! um.. u shd try softer songs though.. or figure out a way 2 blow ur voice up :)

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Shashank Gokhale said

Nithya well done…:D

Prateek good Try….

But musically/frankly speaking…
1. Music Override vocals..(try increasing Mid Frequencing of Vocals)
2. Notes were not straight enough
3. You were winning race with rhythm sometimes…

I would like to listen to ‘GUNCHA KOI’ on Karoake or if sombody can play guitar for you…these kind of suits your voice…

Well keep trying, Nithya… :D

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Mukul Soman said

U rock buddy! i m not technically equipped enuf to find out wats wrong wid ur piece but luved listening to it!

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Sandil Srinivasan said

Pratik,

The pitch and scale aren’t too far away, that’s great. Lacks energy, as you suggested, especially on the ‘wo-ho-oh-ho Sweet Child o’ mine’ bits.

The problem with singing over a karaoke is that you’re bound to the clip’s scale and pitch. Instead, try singing this on your own with a scale you’re comfortable on to pack the right punch.

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Prateek Dayal Muziboo staff said

Thanks everyone :)

I will try to do a softer song like Black magic women posted here next …. lets hope i can do justice to it … if i wanna take singing more seriously are there some practice exercises i can do ?

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Prashanth Hn said

wow!
I think I can learn something from u about singing :-)

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Shourya Sarcar said

great attempt buddy..doing any Axl Rose cover needs a lot of courage. i found this distinctive enough and nice passionate attitude. to my untrained ear, the key pitch is a notch low and need more aggro…think of all the girlfriends you had in school and how you miss them. want to hear a retake. great backup music by sumit.

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Shashank Gokhale said

Dear Prateek,

I would suggest folloing things…

1. Try to sing simple songs first with Low tempo….Try to match Notes…

2. One more simple example…Try playing any random notes on a keyboard or Piano & Try to sing that note vocally…you would get practise of singing notes to the mark though they are random…

3. Try to sing with songs playing instrument say Harmonium, piano or anything on keyboard…Instrument won’t create mistake in notes…if you try to sing as well as play…You would automatically try to match notes of the instruments…

At some point you feel something wrong…Practise that lines slowly & try to match each notes with instrument note…

Let me know if you think my suggestions make sense to you…

Warm Regards
Shashank Gokhale

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Joseph Thomas Pro user said

Prateek, good try. It is really hard to sing a popular hit such as Sweet Child O Mine and for the generations who have been addicted to Axl Rose’ voice would take it so harsh on the criticism part. It is a good try but I would suggest that you try singing some low pitched songs so that you can stick on to the original pitch of the song.

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Asad Zeeshan said

Great::) keep ur voice into safe:)

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Miracle Man said

scream bro scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

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Suman Raghavendra said

hi friends, i m suman i m very fond of western music, basically i m doing ma post graduation. i m fond of rock and rap ma favoriate singers are eminem and curtiz… to tel about dis website really i m happy bcox i can meet with the persons, who r interested n fond of music

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Dj Deepak said

Aha.. I am not sure how I had missed this out.. Great efforts, great song but here are a few things you would want to look into..

Aha.. I am not sure how I had missed this out.. Great efforts, great song but here are a few things you would want to look into..* You definitely would want to improve on pitching

  • The style was good, but it was totally off the scale
  • A few timing issues here and there

What happened in between? Why did you stop? Man!! I was waiting for the last bit where you had to sing totally on high pitch!! This is a great song, I would want to listen to another try from you, or a similar track.. After all, you are in the race too!!

By the way, I donno if all these comments would hold good, as we know that Nithya said “I’m impressed”.. So, you see the bottom line is that the magic worked on the person who you ideally would have wanted to impress.. Does anything matter after that? ;) Just kidding bro.. I know you can sing better than this and I really want to listen to some more!! Common, lets gear up and get the ball rolling.. All the best.. Cheers.. \m/

DJ
“Its all bout music and it always will be!”

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Nithya Muziboo staff said

eeeeh:) my bars are very low!

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Neil Swanson Pro user said

HI PRATREEK..
GREAT SONG ..THE VOCALS R GREAT..SEEMED TO B
IN TIMING ..WILL LISTEN MORE..I JUST LOVED
THE GUITAR PLAYING…….AWESOME..this song
with improvement could definately be a musical
hit. in the UNITED STATES..however i defenately
think a fade in fade out would b worthwhile to
the song. tomorrow i will download this and
do that for you..should only take a few minutes
and reupload for you to take over..
GOD BLESS NEIL (KEEP ON ROCKING..)
A QUOTE FROM STEVE MILLER BAND

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Yogesh Bhatt Pro user said

Hi Prateek,you have sung this song very nicely.EXCELLANT rendition and singing.Good expressions.Very nice voice you have got.RATED 5 STARS AND VOTED,MADE MY FAVOURITE BUT REMAINED UNSUCCESSFUL TO DOWNLOAD IT. Would you kindly spare some of your valuable time to comment, rate and vote for my songs.Some of my recent uploads are,SAU BAAR BANAAKAR MAALIK NE,JAB SE HUM TUM BAHAARON MEIN,MUJHSE SHAAM SUHAANI,YE DUNIYA YE MEHFIL AND MANY MORE.ALSO PL. DON’T FORGET TO DOWNLOAD AND MAKE THEM YOUR FAVOURIT.THANK YOU SO MUCH.CHEERS.YOUR FRIEND YOGESH BHATT.

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Mervin said

u r singining in the wrong pitch….truth.


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