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lovely ghazal.. the lyrics are surreal ! but that’s about the ghazal.. now about your cover : :)
I would have liked someone else to play the guitar for you, only because you seemed to be worried about the chord changes. (continued on next comment)

The chords were perfect, and you were on the right pitch. i suggest you try this again with someone else playing the guitar , so you can enjoy the song. Its a stunning song. is it by Gulzar sahab ?

thnx 4 ur advice yar………but cn u help me out by how 2 make use of dis software………..actually 2 of our members r gone off 2 mumbai 4 sum kinda job & without dem we r like numb!!jus gt into dis site frm nithya.hats off 2 her.

ur both songs sounds fine man!!did a gr8 job!!rock on!!

hello prateek , ..how r u buddy……….me & abhay just trying hard to give best of our performance………..i also listen ur songs that was preety good ……….dear my emailid is verma.sumit317@yahoo.com……ok tc cya

u r trying well..but u have no coordination b/w guitar n singing…so practice more…learn to tap ur feet while playing…the tapping wud decide ur tempo or say metronome,so u can slow down or speed up easily in few days…keep it up

naa.!! not a dj but u can say a kinda hobby.!!!! i just love makin some new music tracks.!!!!!!! i use bout 5 to 6 music software’s to make only one track.!!!

man guitaring was really not good.da song wud hve sounded superb on arpeggios of da chords.guitars and vocals were not in sync.alrite i’ll try and do a cover version of this song!!!!!!

nice actually well tried i can understand that u are not sitting in studio so u have nice voice too but i think u should have been bit louder but as far i think u were concentrating on guitar rather then……..

GOOD ATTEMPT.

Hey Prateek, good work!

An attempt is an attempt! I would suggest couple things. First to practice more before recording. And this song really needs to be picked instead of strummed. You seem to be strumming all down strokes. Did you just start out? I used to do the same thing when I started out in Summer of 06. Although I’m self taught, practice usually pays. Also second thing is the pronunciation. Especially urdu words have to be right on.
Phir = pronounced as phir not fir
Phool = pronounced as phool not Fool

Goodluck man!! and keep playing

Hey Prateek ,

CHords were really good.

I could feel that you were not singing with full energy , probably because of playing the guitar – it happens.

Even I would suggest that you sing without playing the guitar. You can sing better , with more rhythm on the guitar.

Regards
Naveen

Hey Prateek …that was pretty cool …looks like the playing of the guitar took some flow away from your singing ….looking forward to your new attempts :-) How about naa mai hindu na muslmaan mujhe jeene dho …by Jagit singh …its just an awesome song.
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