Hasrat Bezubaan Hai - Original Composition

Krishnan N v said

Hi Nitin….

Wonderful composition ….great tune…. I liked it immensely. But I am not sure whether the singer did full justice to that….Certian fine touches were handled badly. The feel was there.
Overall good.
N V K

Prateek Dayal said

Nice song … great feeling to it

George Kuruvilla said

Hi Nitin,
Really enjoyed this composition. Very soothing…Agree with NVK that the vocals could be a little better. You should re-record this song… It has a lot of potential.

Kumar Srinivasan said

Nice composition Nitin. Pretty closely based on Raag Hamsadhvani is it? Sounds very good.

Kumar.

Ronak R. said

Quite dramatic! Your music surprized me again! This gotta be in limelight. :)

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Nithya said

I have listened to this a number of times, was surprised to find that I have’nt left my appreciation for it

Very soothing. The kinds you may wanna hear after a hard day at work:)

Cheers
Nithya

Prashant Kashyap said

The composition is brilliant. I just wish the vocals were a little softer and matched the dynamics of your musical piece.
You have got your own distinct flavor. I can identify your songs and can identify with them too :)

Great going!

Prashant Kashyap said

Thanks Nitin. It sound very soothing (though I don’t know what change you made :))
Keep up the good work! And you have to send me a CD of your latest compilations. I hope you remember!

Cheers!

Rashmi Nair said

very soothing composition. Arunaditya voice has a lot of clarity. Enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for sharing.
_Rashmi

Geetha Prabhu said

great lyrics… am not sure if the tune could have been different in some places or the vocals could have been better…. (esp the first 4 lines, i feel the tune does not sync with the words)…

Rahul (on and off a bit) said

Dude, this is very soulful……Man Nitin, this is ur 3rd song I am listening and I think u have a lot of potential to make it big….Ur songs touched me deep inside….I connect with every of your song, give me chance man, Would really love to work with you someday…

If possible, can you arrange to send me all you song compilations….would really appreciate it a lot….let me know….my email is ajrockaj@gmail.com
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Rahul Soman said

Nitin,

I personally like these style of compositions. Especially parts where the voice was projected without much music. Your lines are powerful buddy. Rocking 5/5 and goes into my favs

Regards,
Rahul

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Priya B said

Hi Nitin….what a song yaar!!
The tune just straightway touched the soul!
Awesome feel in the rendition by Basuji and Lyrix is great….5/5.
Cheers,
Priya

Praveen Pandit said

Hi Nitin,
Good effort and I always like creativity…Keep practising and singing…

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Shampak Chakravorty said

Mindblowing tune again…… agree with the singing issue….but mainly in the base notes…. mid range is fab…. Wonderful wonderful…. keep it up…… Full Marks from me……

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Harshan Nambiar said

Excellent composition Nitin and excellent vocals ….esp loved the low notes……very beautiful tune.
Mera dyan pura tumhare composition pe atki thi :)
5/5 from me ….
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Vijay Krishna (moving out..) said

I simply loved it:-) arrangement is very beautiful.I like the singing actually. The felt it was there which is very critical to these type of songs.In my perspective it is flawless,But may be its just me :-?) and yes the repetitive character of the tune actually helps better to sink inside:-).5/5

Rohit Jawale said

Hi Nitin, I really feel the vibes man….:) Sometimes you come across an amazing song which you hear & think – "why din’t I write & compose this song before it went to this guy’s head? “Hasrat Bezubaan hai” is that types for me. You have gre8 potential. keep it up buddy.

To start with, I really liked the chord progression & variations at some parts. e.g. at the start of this line – “Dar-ba-dar se guzarte rahe”, addition of F chord sounds good(if your scale is C, I hope so). Btw, when tune similar to “dar-ba-dar” repeats several times afterwards, – “To itni baat maan le” & “Par mujhe aaj bhi dhyaan hai”, I would use a slightly variation of progression, say e.g., Am-Em-F-C) at least once. Same suggestion for all the similar parts that repeat twice or thrice. That slight change of a chord for the same tune in front lifts the composition drastically. (Just my opinion, I mean, I would do it in my compositions of this genre)

At 2:27, introduction of distortion overdrive sounds amazing. The overall treatment (orchestration wise) of this song is similar to ‘Saiyya’ by Kailsh Kher. It might be because of the drumline, use of tabla & guitar, music pieces like the one at 2:36 etc & the overall structure. Good.

The transitions where you have changed rimshot to snare at some places are really smooth. To my too much technical ears (& being a drummer), the continuous use of only choke sounded monotonous towards the end of song. The use of soft ride or very light splashes here & there would add a nice variation. E.g. in guitar part after verse 2 or at the start of the verses etc.

I really liked your vocals & the lyrics. More on that in the next post.

All in all, gre8 song brother. Keep ‘em coming….cheers & tc…:)

Rohit Jawale said

@ Azam bhai – I don’t completely agree with you but for all your 3 points about the lyrics, but you surely have a point. Let’s consider them one by one.
1. Kashish saans mein atki thi – Yes, Kashish means attraction. It also has alternate Urdu meaning of “allurement” or “drawaing towards”. In Hindi sometimes it is used to describe some sort of “chaah”. E.g. kuch (a particular thing) karneki chah, kuch bolneki chah, kisi insaan ki taraf (towards) chaah etc. I mean, attraction towards a particular thing which you want to do/say/implement. In this case, the word kashish is used for this “desire” or “chaah” or attraction & also, being helpless about it, because he’s stuck there.
2. “Jab main tum aur pehli baarsih, sadkon pe bhatak rahe the” – I would just say that these are the folklore terms. Well whether to use a spoken way of language in a song is a matter of personal choice, its fine with me at least. I have heard this sort of implementation even in many great songs. E.g. many times I have heard the use of sentence like – “hum baat keh diye” when ideally it should be “hum ne baat kahi” or “hum ne baat ko keh diya” etc.
3. “Par mujhe aaj bhi dhyaan hai” – yes, dhyaan is focus. Well maybe he means “Aaj bhi us baat ke upar mera dhyaan hatata nahi”. Now whether Nitin wanted to use the word as a “memory” or “focus” is a different issue but grammatically, the sentence is not wrong.

Anyways, the interpretation of different words could be slightly different in various regions/languages. Just wanted to put forward this is how I would interpret them. Just a personal opinion. But I’m glad we’re discussing about lyrics & arrangements & not just vocals. Hope we all keep coming up with good originals. Lyrically, musically & vocally too. Cheers to Nitin & Azam bhai…:) TC.

Rohit Jawale said

@ Azam – Yes brother, completely agree with you on this one….!! Lyrics, the poetry should be placed at the top in the hierarchy…!!

Murali Venkatraman said

Nitin :

You have made your music space a must visit for me with these lyrics of yours. I am so glad to see original and beautiful lyrical imagery. I can understand urdu/hindi very well but my knowledge of grammar (especially the gender) itself is nothing to write about.

Coming to the ham, tum aur baarish sadkon pE bhatak rahe the : The moment I read it this is what came in my mind. Just a couple of days ago Melbourne received thundershowers and I was inside my car parked in a safe place waiting for it to subside. The breeze accompanying the rain was making the rain really show a wavy random pattern under the streetlights and it was really the “baarish ka bhatakna” due to the incessant unrelenting breeze ! And also I saw a young couple in love enjoying their beautiful moment under this rain. So, it is probably not wrong to say the rain was wandering (due to breeze) with them on the streets !

The singer is very flat in his vocals and has made this song sound more like a church song/ rhyme. IF the intention was to create a song with innocent romance as theme, like say “akele hain to kya” even then it falls short. You will be better off using somebody who may infuse more volume modulations and harkats.

Radhika Nair said

Nitin – first time on your page and am really glad that i followed Murali here. So very rare to find such beautiful thoughts – more than anything i really enjoyed your poetry(understood most of it luckily, though my mother tongue is not Hindi). Very soothing composition too . Arunaditya has a nice voice – could have been more expressive though to breathe in life into your lovely lyrics. 5 from me.

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Dr. daniel Paul said

Mr. Nitin & Mr.Basu…. Wonderful combination of talents.

Excellent lyrics, composition and singing too. When we invent something that is where the real talent is exposed and liked it a lot. Simply for the lyrics.

Very well done, hope talents like this get their share of praise. I surely rate this more than a 5 and loved it a lot.
God Bless You both.

Kuhoo (www.reverbnation.com/kuhoogupta) Gupta said

This one is an amazing piece of work again !
In singing, people have said few things above. I agree that the low notes were not that well projected. Also the smoothness is lacking at places. Overall great team work !!!
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Shonnie Madan said

very very nice

Krishna Srinivas said

this tune stays in mind and keeps running in the background of mind when i work on daily routine stuff :) have listened to this song numerous times but had not left a comment :)

Max Vala said

good work!

Shyama Menon said

Beautiful music….and arrangement too…loved it….:)

Hassu said

Once again a touchy tune with strong lyrics, Basu bro is not up to the expectations this time with some of his “harkatein” not being soft as they should have been is what I felt. Overall a great composition …

Rajesh Gopinath said

i liked the way it starts… “EK Kashish”…
This song reminds me of Mumbai and its rains, trains, pot holes, couples enjoying Marine Drive while its still raining , just a lot of images running in the background ….Loved it…
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Hassu said

Yes Nitin but I feel you should not underestimate yours or his talent at any point. Each of you have undoutedly a tremendous amount of potential that’s needed to execute a top-notch number. I have heard him in your other compositions and feel he could, with his current talent, very well fill the very minor gaps:) Just a thought though :)
Hope to hear more of your lovely compositions and wish you the very best for your endeavours

Ramya Harish said

Wow, Awesome work! Lovely tune! am sad am nt able to understand sum complex lyrics, guess its urdu or maybe hindi itself?!
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Pinks said

Wonderful composition….with full expressions….love the lyrics….it gives a great feel :)
Tc & keep smiling
Pinks

Dilip Mani said

very gud composition, all the best always.
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