Mar Jaawan - Fashion

Mar Jaawan - Fashion Lyrics & Chords

Tried attempting a hindi cover for a change. This was tough for someone like me who has never sung a hindi number alongwith a k-track before…

The k-track was provided by Smitha Passanha, thanks loads Smitha :) ; and George mixed this for me, adding a quadrupled effect to the vocals and vocoder effect to the ending chorus. Thanks for making it sound so cool GK.

Hope you guys like this… Please leave your honest comments and feedback on scope for improvement in singing…

Cheers!

Reuploaded with slight changes.

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George Kuruvilla said

Good job Neha. I thought the expressions and singing was good for the most part. As we discussed, there were a few pitchy portions at the start and at the end. Overall a good attempt. You will get better with time. Just keep singing.

One more thing. Smitha Passanha gave me this track. So credit goes to her! THANKS SMITHA :-)

-George

Neha Sharma said

Thanks George… your comments hold great value to me :)

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Sreeharshan Nambiar said

Neha …great job with this contemporary yet melodius song. You have sung this very well , very expressive …just a few offs on the higher notes. The mixing is fantastic, but it sounds a little over processed for me…Your voice sounds great in the lower registers…

5/5 from me for this hindi rendition …keep it up and hope to hear more hindi songs.

Neha Sharma said

Thank you so much for your feedback Sreeharshan!! appreiate it!

Tara Balki said

I have attempted this song and know how difficult it is to be expressive at this pitch… liked ur rendtion a lot Neha!!

Neha Sharma said

Hey thanks Tara… so glad this came from you!!

George Kuruvilla said

Forgot to rate. Definitely a 5/5 this time. Will be tougher in the future :-)

-George

Smitha Passanha said

Neha

This was a nice attempt! This one is on my to do list too :-) Ur voice suits this song. There were some pitchy portions which you could work on. But overall, was good! Hoping to hear more hindi numbers from u. And let me know anytime you need a karaoke…will be glad to help :-)

- Smitha

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Neha ........ said

Thanks for ur feedback Smitha… would surely get in touch with u if i require any hindi k- tracks, its difficult to find them online… looking forward to ur version of this song… cheers!

Please listen to my latest upload:

Mar Jaawan – Fashion

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Rahul

Rahul (getting back to routine) Pro user said

i listened to it again……

places to improve : some variations were done good and some fell flat……not pleasing to my ears……but thats just me :)

Also the ending notes of the words hai, ho are not round……….its called “aakaar” in classical lingo…. opening the mouth and practicing will eliminate the problem……

Vocals were not clear sometimes, but could be due to mixing and also the low range of the song….so i will give u the benefit of the doubt there….

George, good job with the mixing……u r a pro in making good singers sound professional……:)

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Neha ........ said

Thanks loads for ur valued feedback AJ… :)

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Rakesh Baro said

You have sung it beautifully again…… there were off notes …very few….
I would repeat i loved your rendition…the bass in your voice is amazing….keep singing this way. you have a great voice and don’t go for controlled singing ever just to get rid of those offnotes….you have a gifted voice ( the bass in your voice )…keep practising and you will be perfect …open your throat while singing ,minus offnotes and you will be a star :)…phewwwww this is the second time I am giving you a biggggggg feedback….am sleepy nowww

This is for GK
Georgeee brooooooooo great mixing….I wish I could mix like you bro….

5/5 for the bass in your voice neha….aur kuch hindi gaane ho jaayen Neha , tho kya baat hai….

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Neha ........ said

Thanks soooo much Rakesh ji, for taking out time to listen, comment and rate yet again :-) you made my day!!!!!

your feedback is of immense value, I would surely keep all you said in mind… hope to get a continued feedback from you in future, to help me inprove on my singing :-)

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Harshan (away) Nambiar Pro user said

This revised mix is much better ….Great job George……I liked it even better.

Neha …the huskiness in your voice is just incredible in the lower registers. Hope to hear a lot of Hindi songs from you. You are a rising star of Muziboo ……!!!!!

5/5 again ….

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Krishnan N v said

Neha….
It was just SUPERB… You are a awesome singer with lovely and unique voice…

I found the rendition almost flawless….though heard just one or two off notes….not major though… As Harshan said the huskiness in you voice and the expressive singing of yours are indeed brilliant.

Do come out with more Hindi numbers….

All the best…

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Sanjay Agrawal said

beautiful.superb performance.i loved it.forget about little mistake,u have sung very well.

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Solu said

HI NEHA,
WOW, Excellent attempt,superb singing Awesome,you have given exact feel of song.
cheers
sohail

Vijay

Vijay (away...) Iyer said

Amazing singing Neha. Love this rendition. Must say you have a very unique voice. Minor problems but the good dominates the weak. ;-)

5/5 on this effort….Keep it up….Looking forward to more hindi numbers

Regards,
-Vijay

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Very well sung. Enjoyed your song and lovely voice.
Good luck

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Neha ........ said

Sreeharshan – Thnks so much for listening again and re-rating… I agree, George is the one responsible for adding life to the rendition…!!

NVK – I am so glad u liked my attempt. Will try do more Hindi numbers in future :-)

Sanjay, Solu – Glad you could take out time to listen and comment!

Vijay – Thanks loads for the appreciation and rating!!

Narayanan – Glad u liked it!

Wow… i am so glad to get such a positive response to my attempt… thanks all for the encouragement!!

- Neha :D

Please listen to my latest upload:
Mar Jaawan – Fashion
Also listen to
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Deepak Nayak said

- A few pitching issues and a few flat notes… I’m sure George would have already told you about it… :)

- Good mixing George… :)

- I guess we can call Smitha as our producer for this song… Thanks for giving us this song Smitha…

All in all a great attempt… Good job all of you… Cheers… \m/

DJ
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Neha ........ said

Hey Deejay! Thanks loads for the feedback :D will work towards improvement… and thanks for appreciating our work :)

All you guys rock :)

- Neha :D

Please listen to my latest upload:
Mar Jaawan – Fashion
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Deepak Nayak said

Hey Neha… I actually had something more to say too… I’m glad to hear you doing different stuff… You are now gonna move up to the next level of singing with the kinda tracks you are working on… However, you would need to draw some special attention towards the flat notes and other feedback…

My personal suggestion to you would be to practice even more before you do the actual recording… Don’t mark a track as “Ok” if you think it has quite a few errors… Take your time but try and eliminate as many errors as possible… I’m confident that you can do it… You have a good voice… Keep up the good work and all the best… Cheers… \m/

P.S: Whenever I think that an artist is moving up to the next level, it also makes me a little strict while listening to the song and commenting on it… :)

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Smitha Passanha said

Hey Neha

This version sounds better. I would suggest practising more and trying to get rid of the flat notes. That’s the only negative here. You have great potential and just need a little more work to make the rendition top notch! So keep singing….expecting more of such nice ones from u! 5/5 for the huskiness in your voice :-)

- Smitha

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Roshini said

Good one Neha, i feel the huskiness in your vocals suits the song well. keep up the good work!

Best Regards,
Rosh

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Neha ........ said

DJD… thnks for considering me capable enuf… i’d appreciate ur criticism… as i need it to grow n do better!! n ur honest feedback is what i need the most now!

Smitha… thnx for listening agn an commenting… trying my best and working 2wrds ur comments!

Rosh. so glad u took out time to listen and comment… cheers!!

- Neha :D

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Krishna Prasad said

Undoubtedly tremendous!!!! I never believe its a cover :) should be original ;)

xcellent job… keep up the good work!! 5/5 from me :)

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Neha ........ said

Hey Krishna… Thanks loads! m flattered :)

- Neha :D

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Rashmi Nair Pro user said

This is a wonderful rendition Neha. Loved your voice and expressions. Mixing is also cool.
5/5 from me!

~Rashmi~

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Neha ........ said

Hey Rashmi… Thanks loads :)

- Neha :D

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Sudeip Ghosh said

Hey Neha
that was some great stuff !!!
loved your voice modulation

i guess everybody else has already covered the technical aspects of your song….overall excellent effort

i would say continue recording and do some more songs you are definitely getting there !!
excellent stuff !


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Neha ........ said

Thnx tonnes SG…!

- Neha :D

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Jane Mathew said

Hi Neha…

Expressions were superb!!

Ur voice def suits this song…u could take bit more care on the nuances. for instance : tere ishq pe mar jaawan, i think u slightly missed out on the detailed nuances.

Keep singing :)

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Srividya Kasturi Pro user said

First time here, very nice and expressive…

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Neha ........ said

Hey Jane… Thnx for stoppin by and for ur feedback… working towards improving on my singing… :-)

Srividya… thnx so mch for visiting and for ur comment :-)

- Neha :D

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Laurance Tan said

This is a really cool Hindi song. I like the orchestration. A very unique voice, thanks for sharing!

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Kumar Srinivasan Pro user said

Very nice rendition Neha. Enoyed listening to this. Post more hindi songs.

-Kumar.

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Neha ........ said

Thnks loads Laurance and Kumar…!

- Neha :D

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Neha ........ said

Thanks loads Ramasethu! :)

- Neha :D

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Anirban Chowdhury said

Hi Neha – Never heard this song before. The start sounded like Aisha by outlandish.

Your vocals sounded very apt for this song, good bass and volume. A very low scale song for a female vocalist. Nicely done low notes.

I think this is your best. I will go with 5/5 and nothing less!!

Great work with the mix.

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Supratim Das said

whoa……fantastic singing…….you are just getting better with every new upload……and George is as good as always……loved it totally
5/5
goes to my favs!

-Supratim

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Neha ........ said

Sowmya, Anirban, Supratim, Shonnie… thnku thnku thnku sooo much!!!! :D :D

- Neha :D

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Susheil Kumar said

Good one Neha… and nice mixing… maybe will take some classes from george on mixing :)

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Prem j Hans said

Fantastic Singing Neha…your vocals are Superb, flawless singing.5/5 and keep up the good work.

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Neha ........ said

Susheil… Thnkx and yea u could contact George trust me u’ll not end up disappointed. he’s always there to help!! :-)

Prem thanks so very much :-)

- Neha :D

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Neha ........ said

Thnks so mch ya Vikram :)

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Soumitra Sarkar said

That was very impressive Neha…very well done…i enjoyed very much…keep it going :)

- Soumitra

Pls listen to my Halka Halka Sa attempt.

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Neha ........ said

Thnkx Soumitra! glad u liked :)

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Meera Manohar Pro user said

You have an awesome voice Neha.

Very nice, however that being said, a few pitchy portions towards the end and the start. Not heard the song before but liked what I heard :-)

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Neha ........ said

Meera… thankx loads for listening and feedbak… :)

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Radhika Nair (away) said

Neha – what a distinct voice you have !!! Noticed a couple of offs…but nothing major. With a voice like that, am sure you will go places. This was very very good – All the best ,Neha.

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Manish Kumar said

hey Neha You have a good voice…. i really liked it…. ******************** 4 u… keep it up….

i have added you to my friends list…. in case you get time do listen to my rendition.

Kind and Melodious regards
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Neha ........ said

Srividya, Manish. thnx loads for ur comments :)

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Karthik Nagarajan Pro user said

Hi Neha :)…sorry for the late response…but thank you very much for your genuine comments :) Regarding this song, very nice singing :) you indeed have done well for your first attempt at Hindi. Also great song selection because it seems to suit your style and voice hand in glove.

Keep posting more!
best regards:
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Ranjit Salian Pro user said

Hi divine Neha as I call you.

You have kept up to the divinity in your voice in this song too.

Commendable job. This is not an easy song to sing.

2 songs from your side and I have rated both of them 5/5. Rejoice in the glory of God and the music of the soul.

Take Care divine soul,
Keep the faith always,
God Bless You….

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Neha ........ said

Thanks Karthik… Appreciate ur feedbak!

Wow Ranjit… thanks so v much… :)

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Sunil Koshy said

Hey Neha….
Sung very well :)

cheers….
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Srini S (bye bye friends) Pro user said

nice one neha,loved it in ur voice.keep it up

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Neha ........ said

Thnks a lot for taking a listen and commenting Koshy and Srini… glad y’all liked it :)

Its George who created magic with my voice with his mixing… I give him 80% credit for this!! :) Cheers!!!

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Srini S (bye bye friends) Pro user said

ofcourse neha,wen we sing in the studios or any sta
ge or anywhere our work is only 10percent,the rest
credit goes to the soundengg n the musicians n the
composers.

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Ajay Chandran said

Neha… great voice… loved your version of this song.

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Sutapa Chk said

Hey Neha…beautifully sung….keep it up

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Neha ........ said

Srini… could agree no more :)
Ajay & Sutapa… So glad u guys liked it !! :) :)

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Neha ........ said

Thnku for listening and favouriting Keshav :)

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Gowri Gopal said

hey nice singing… cud u send me d karoke…. im not finding d karoke anywhere… thanks

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αнмε∂ Khan said

very very good singing!
lovely voice and expression:)

keep it up!
and kindly check it out my songs too.
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wow …great singing …….expression are right …
sab kuch ok ……or mixing bhi zabardast hain ……keep it up ………
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Nice singing… enjoyed it!
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Vijay Krishna (moving out..) said

I liked the tonal quality, its by far the best on this site for female, but at times it was flat.Put a smile while singing and u will be half a note up:-).Also variation were missing at times.But nothing to take away… nyways me new to this site… so checking all the gr88 singers…

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Neha ........ said

thanks for the comments guys…!
@Vijay welcome to Muziboo… all pointers noted!

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Shaniruh Pro user said

Neha !

Nicely sung …… but you can do much better ;-)
like your voice quality .

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Syed Ahmed said

good neha i feel you can do better……

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Saqib Javed said

Very romentic song i think this song is not for ur voice but u sung well.Keep it up

Cheers!!!
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Sudeip Ghosh said

wowwwwww !! I was floored when i heard this ! Neha great stuff….no wonder it has been some 450 times
you should have sung the original !!
i think you did an effortless rendition !
great stuff
very nice very good !
great stuff
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Christopher Charles said

Neha ji, excellent singing. and your voice is wonderful. great work. keep it up !

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Vineet Bedi said

Good One!

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Pratik Sawant said

10/10 well done. This song is really hard for females. happy to have you here. thanks


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