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Please please please.
I want some real critics here. Serious negatives… as this will be deleted in a few days after I receive enough suggestions and guidelines.
I want your comments especially for bass and the theme.
How the hell this bass will sound all good on music system also, as its friendly with my headphones.
I know snares are too dull.. and its a bit repeating at times. I also agree the kick interferes bass at many places.
I have some vocals for this, which needs female singer… if anyone can help in that, much appreciated.
Thats it.. Thanks a lot. :)
~ Ronak R. / RokZRooM
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I quite like this … not sure technically though :)
I wonder how you would layer lyrics over it
Heh, thanks. I’ll tell you, when I do so, how I do it.
Ronak, George has said his wife can sing well! Get Goerge to get his wife to do this for you:)
Ronak,
Not sure if this is TRUE …but I think you are more focused on using skills of using samples than elaborating and plotting theme…
I would suggest you can plan few things very clear before sequencing this loop…and Avoid just joining loops to make a good Sounding Music…
Ronak,This is excellent piece of work and sound very well…I may be completely wrong but think over the above point…
Well, while making any music, one would “think”.. either by having some instrument in hand like guitar or casio.. and I “think” as I move on making anything.. theme comes out.. basically from the mood I’m having. There are no “loops” as such.. so I enjoyed sampling the sound that was in my head.. so it was like I created what I thought of.. likewise.. all melodies and things (except plucked) were created using 3xOsc.. and I enjoyed that too.
So, mostly, it was like creating the tune and the beats by following the thing in the head. :)
This was made keeping in mind the vocals.. which I cant reveal now. But, they’re definitely a good fit for this music. ;p
Last but not the least, I appreciate the advice given.. and that will be reflected in the collaboration we’ll do. :D
Cheerzzzz…
Aight.. Good thing to listen to something like this after a while!! Good job!!
About the song:
* Bass line is cool
* The theme sounded more like X-files stuff.. I guess the name should have been “The Dark night” ;)
* I would imagine extremity of voice on this track.. Either a deep low pitch voice, whisper or the other extreme of totally high pitch shout with reverb and other effects.. I guess that should sound good on this track
* With the kind of progression that you’ve used, I would think of a break at 2:04 mins in the song.. Just vox or sounds of footsteps on dry leaves with some thunder and lightning sound.. Then bring it back into the track again..
* I donno why, but I thought a giggle at 2:45 mins would sound good again.. Pardon my weird ideas.. I am just jotting down what I think would sound good..
* End the song again with the giggle (Go for echo and fade out)
Note: Everything mentioned above is with female vox..
DJ
“Its all bout music and it always will be!”
Thanks a lot, DJ, for all these wonderful ideas. Really, wonderful. You figred it correctly.. the vocals are going to be mostly low pitch.. along with some extreme notes if possible in my vox.. like hard rock ones. ;) I’m working to get NVK ’s daughter Priyanka to sing on this.. and if all goes well, you’ll listen great outcome soon.:D Cheeers..
hey ronak,
ur track sounds good, u would need some more compression on the low end to make it tighter though, will up-load another track i did, its not mixed yet but just for your reference, listen to it, its a commercial lounge track done with my producer zeeshan, infact he`s the one who commented on the tech details i mentioned here about your song, r u a music producer or a dj, kindly give me your personal e-mail to negotiate further, the track is called hall of mirrors, chk it out!