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Actually working on filling interludes for another song under development and accidentally played a “wrong” chord for that song but that chord became the life of this song! Planning for lyrics and vocal.

Main reason for uploading at this stage is I am not sure what would be a good theme for lyrics. If you can tell me what comes in your mind when you first listen to this that would be helpful.

*Though it’s composed from scratch not sure how original it is. Let me know if you find any similarities.

Guitars played on keyboard! Download and listen for better clarity.


June 2nd 2010

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it sounds very pleasant.it will be suitable for a happy familys day out or picnic.it is my feeling. may be i am wrong.all the best satish.

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Rahul Soman said

Satish,

Since you asked for a theme for this song….

Imagine a guy walking in a new place or country. He looks at everything with a bewildered look. Everything is so new and strange, yet interesting. But still something is amiss, what could be that? Yes…. her, those days how she would talk animatedly to him and bring the smile to his face…. The way she used to console him and when deep down she might be in turmoil. The longing for companionship and a true partner could be a theme…. just some random thoughts….
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ராஜ் குமார் அஞ்சன் said

Satish! A nice piece of music… Completely plunged into this to fix a theme, as u have asked… I could only confine this to a protagonist strumming the guitar chords and singing to detail his friends about his first meet with his lady love… I could see mountains, waterfalls and huge trees at the back-drop… I am not a great thinker/creator… With my limitations in thinking, I could set this as the theme… :-)
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Shashi D said

Sounds very rich. I think this is a fusion work and I think representing Indian culture goes best with this one. Like colors, sarees, and things of Indian folk. Appropriate tabala touch would be nice along with sparse use of other Indian instruments.
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Uthra said

Satish: Liked it a lot. The theme that came to my mind was India – a song that depicts the country’s beauty, national integration etc.

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Cnu said

beautiful composition Satish, very well done. It has a nice flowing touch to it. no wonder ppl are thinking aobut loved ones, mountains, waterfalls and india…….thanks
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Swati Prasad said

lovely music
soothing tune

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Babu Nm said

lovely its really pleasant…let me c …if i can get anything for this ……hope so

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Tara Balakrishnan said

sounds lovely Satish! looking fwd to the final version!!! sounds like a title/theme music for a movie:) guitars sound lovely!!

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Like this song alot very charing music
and melodic well executed. hypntoic but
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Pete Something said

this 4 me is the best of the lot from all of ur compositions, would be interesting to see how it shapes up.I’m already building up the whole song in my head, hehe

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Lakshmana Rao said

baagundi….mallee neetho pani paDaeTlu undi naaku… :) particular gaa naakae theme raaledu…neekaemainaa vastae cheppu…. chaesaeddaam
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Rekha swaminathan (on and off...) said

Satish, very very interesting tune and chords. Your wrong chord indeed evokes a very familiar sensation, just listening to it.
The following are the emotions and mood-sets that immediately came to my mind listening to this piece -
1. Conflict, in the mind.
2. Hesitation in some kind of decision making.
3. Lost in contemplation.
4. Bright and warm afternoon shades, the people and colors around only buzzing around. They’re all in the background….
5. Not necessarily a romantic set-up… :)
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Balaji Seetharaman said

Hello Satish lovely piece ! Perfect suits a particular scene and imaginations just flowed for me !

This is what i was able to picturize. A guy in the lead our hero riding a cycle in a beautiful hill station like Ooty where its early misty morning all colourful with trees/ flowers around and leaves on the ground. He passes thru lush green lawns and there are people walking fully geared up with sweaters and monkey caps. While our hero enjoys his early morning ride, he sees a very cute beautiful girl jogging with T-shirts & tracks also with wrist bands on either hands and head bands matching the colour that of the her tee shirt and with ipod headphones on her ears and the wires kinda jumping around.

While she passes him he follows here trying to get a glimpse of her again and again and then the girl actually with a little doubt turns around with a half naughty half angry look and then this guy looks elsewhere as if he is not following her :) Then its independence day that day and there is this flag hoisting ceremony in a school both the hero and the girl stand for a minute and salute the flag and continue on their journey. Cannot stop imagining the flag hoisting scene as the tune in the middle instantly made me think that way !

Then gets back home with all thoughts of her, talking to himself, jumping around thinking about her ! This is where ill have a song in the movie :D phew !!!! Lovely tune seriously Satish ! Just kept my imagination going !
Cheers,
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Harry Jassal (inactive) said

Satish, To me it looks more on the lines of patriotic song like Vande Matram (ARR Fame) / Jan Gan Man type but obviously a different and nice tune. Like Bharat Humko Jaan Se Pyara Hai…

Just on same thoughts of Raj, Shashi, Uthra.

A sample ldea for lyrics :

Jai Jai Ho Bharat Vishal,
Sundarata Hai Jiski Kamaal,

Saagar Se Himalay Tak,
Ooty Se Le Assam Tak,
Bengal Se Punjab Tak,
Sab kuch hee to hai Bemisaal….

Just a thought (with the first thought that came to my mind)…. based on “Bharat Humko Jaan Se Pyara Hai Theme” from Roja.

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Roshine Gnanatharshan. said

Felt like this music will fit in to a theme like……. a guy asking questions from a gal who has not replied to him about his proposal. From 1.09-1.29 you could use some swaras or humming which could be filled with a female voice.

Lovely composition satish.
It’s simply amazing.
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Vishak Subramoney said

sounds very nice……theme sounds like some is in deep thought about something he/she is about to do.

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Harshan Nambiar (away for a month india vacation) Pro user said

Very creative and beautiful Satish. ….this reminds me of a soul deep in thought ……going on a long distance drive, recollecting ….with the sun setting behind him….to my favs…for sure.
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Satish Vammi said

Thank you all for stopping by and giving so much thought about the song….really appreciate it. It’s amazing how differently each of you felt this song….I personally didn’t expect it to be romantic. I thought it may be good fit for guy telling his failed story and how he overcame it….so it ends with a strong message….lets see how it turns out! Will share the outcome….
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Deepesh A k(indefinitely on and off) said

Gud one satish……very interesting……Looking forward to hear the final………
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Hassu said

Sounds a mixture of a sad and romantic to me. If you try adding lyrics of low emotions, a little change in the middle portions could really make it very catchy tune. Currently, the sustainance is lacking, wish u good luck! :)

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Adithi said

Satish
Loved this piece from you! This is how I visualised it….

There is this two people who are in love but have split (something along the lines of VTV)….then they reminisce about one another when this song appears….Different shots- Chennai traffic, workplace, temple, beach etc etc….you fill in the rest! :D

Fabulous work, Satish! Fit to enter into a movie rightaway! :) To favs!

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Maruthi said

Beautiful yaar….one word describes it, If I were you I will put this as RR track. Should be fine on a short film narrated about a person who is blind,or someway handicapped trying hard to fit in the social network……facing all that ill looks at him ( for example a deaf and dum person ) striving hard and eventually fits in the society.A full motion picture without any words just this music. That will sure go places……dont ruin this track by vocals or human expressions …….just play the

background noises like traffic, people groups, coughs, chatting, distant song from radio etc no words just these and your music . Will be a finest peice of short film on next oscars. All the best.
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Beautiful yaar….one word describes it, If I were you I will put this as RR track. Should be fine on a short film narrated about a person who is blind,or someway handicapped trying hard to fit in the social network……facing all that ill looks at him ( for example a deaf and dum person ) striving hard and eventually fits in the society.A full motion picture without any words just this music. That will sure go places……dont ruin this track by vocals or human expressions …….just play the

background noises like traffic, people groups, coughs, chatting, distant song from radio etc no words just these and your music . Will be a finest peice of short film on next oscars. All the best.
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Max Vala said

Satish,

i tried to form some lyrics on your composition…i am not sure if it is perfect.

मै तो बस चला था
छू….ने आसमा को
पाने इस जमी को
मेरे खुदा!

मै तो बस चला था
छू….ने आसमा को
पाने इस… जमी को
मेरे खुदा!!!

कहा थी वो मंझिल
कैसा वो जहाँ था
कैसे जाना वहा था
जानु ना मे…….

कहा थी वो मंझिल
कैसा वो जहाँ था
कैसे जाना वहा था
जानु ना मे…….

चलते-चलते खो गया मे
इन अन्जाने चहेरो मे
मिलता नही मेरा अपना…… कोइ भी

चलते-चलते खो गया मे
इन अन्जाने चहे…रो मे
मिलता नही मेरा अपना…… कोइ भी

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Harry Chops said

Nice soothing composition. Agree with the theme suggested in lyrics by Max. I think a KK type rendition will be suitable for this.
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very nice composition, keep it up

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Shrikanth Kumar said

Interesting perceptions :)
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Biju Ramachandran Pro user said

nice work.i see a romantic pair….
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Sudha Kumar (back to listen to all of you..) said

Sounded beautiful, Satish. The beats with the guitar strumming piece gave the feeling like a guy (perhaps a grad student) singing this song on a Fall day with autumn leaves falling and just singing lazily thinking about how life goes on no matter what…
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Sushane Shankar said

Very nice Satish…. love ur arrangement!!
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Raghu Kedar said

So, one thing led to another! Very original and very soothing, Satish!

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Subhash David Pro user said

Satish,
Nice composition. You can develop a very good melodious song out of this. Subhash

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Neeti said

refreshing piece of composition …… i m still so engrossed n lost in it tat i cant take my mind away to think of a theme…… al the best …. awaiting to hear the finals

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Deepa said

I love this! I can think of this composition as personification of something beautiful blooming… could be a flower, or someones heart…


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