Tum itna Jo Muskura Rahe ho - Cover

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Next Hindi song in my shelf :-)
This is a really quick recording :-) just had 30 minutes to finish it :-)

Tum Itna Jo Muskura Rahe Ho
Kya Gham Hai Jisko Chhupa Rahe Ho

Aankhon Mein Nami, Hansi Labon Par
Kya Haal Hai Kya Dikha Rahe Ho

Ban Jayenge Zehar Peete Peete
Yeh Ashq Jo Piye Ja Rahe Ho

Jin Zakhmon Ko Waqt Bhar Chala Hai
Tum Kyon Unhe Chhedhe Ja Rahe Ho

Rekhaon Ka Khel Hai Muqaddar
Rekhaon Se Maat Kha Rahe Ho

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Pradeep Barre said

Hi Sumit,

I am really honored….nice try……however….I felt the timing could have been better….your voice is good….a bit of practice would make you even more effective…….so keep singing and enjoy….
Thanks a lot for forwarding the ghazal….

Thanks & Regards,
Pradeep

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Rakesh Baro Pro user said

Mere Dost,
I appreciate your attempt to sing this beuatiful ghazal, however with your voice quality you could have done better…kya voice hai bhai….timing issues are there, some diction issues are there too, urdu words arent done properly , which shouldnt have been there since I think taal of the song isnt that difficult…“Jisko” bahaut jaldi ga diya…
You can definitely do lot better as dear AJ said upstairs….

Cheers

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Neha ........ said

good attempt dude… keep singin… n rock on :D

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Smitha Passanha said

This was a good attempt! Just that it needs to be more flowy….you seem to be stressing on words a lot. Keep singing!

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Mohammed Ashraf said

Sumit: Good effort, brave too:) Experts pointed out the area of improvements. But I liked ur voice.

Keep it up.

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Harshan Nambiar (away for a month india vacation) Pro user said

Sumit ….brave attempt at a classic Jagjit singh song ….man gaya ustad :-) I have never sung a ghazal in my life :-) …yours was a good effort …this should have been rendered with a more smooth feel ….but I am sure with your talent and dedication …you will soon come out with your best attempt ….also agree to some of the above pointers….keep singing bro …the more you sing the more better you will become eventually….we are all here to learn from our mistakes and improve. At the end of the day thats what counts.

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Krishnan N v ( nvk ) said

Hi Sumit….

It was good that you are trying to sing a ghazal… surely something which suits your voice. I mean to say, a ghazal properly rendered in your voice would sound Superb.

You have just started to venture in to singing bollywood(Hindi) songs. At this stage I would say that you get more perfection in Hindi songs as you need to come out of your western style of rendition and get in to the Indian way of singing with all those harqauts and murkhis etc., Before perfecting these, attempting a ghazal could be disastrous. To some it comes naturally, but to many it(Ghazals) are quite a difficult genre to sing….

As regards this number I wish to echo the same views expressed by many, above. There are many areas needing improvement…

Hope you will take my comments as above in the right spirit…

All the best…

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Ramya Harish said

One of my all time fav ghazal. Expressions matter a lot to ghazals. Take your time to practise well and come out with your best. Keep singing.

Cheers:)
Ramya

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Sumit Rai said

> pradeep : i totally have a lot to learn when it comes to hindi singing . keep having timing troubles, i do appreciate that you like my voice :-) thanks a lot bro for listening n feedback :-)

> AJ : Man i think it sure is going to take me some time to understand about hindi singing , while i was singing this ,, i thought it was going pretty well :-) i’ll make it smooth next time :-) Thanks a lot bro for listening n feedback :-)

> Rakesh : Ya true i sang the song too quick , maybe thats the problem here , but i know there are a lot more problems i got with singing hindi songs :-) my idea is to keep getting feedback so that i know whats right n whats wrong :-) timing , rhythm , diction will work on them :-). Thanks for appreciating my voice :-) thanks for listening n feedback :-)

> Neha : Thanks for a sweet little comment there :-) thanks for saying it was a good attempt :-) will keep singing n rocking :-) Thanks for listening n feedback :-)

> Ashraf : Thanks bro, i will keep note of the pointers of improvement people have given me , keep practising , n keep posting :-) … Thanks for appreciating my voice :-) , thanks for listening n feedback :-)

> harshan : ya its brave because i didn’t know i was doing something brave :p . i totally love this song , has got a lovely video also :-) … jagjit sing ji has an amazing voice, i wish i could sing like him :-) this was a hurried attempt but i didnt know i was messing it up , thats the serious part, i should be aware what im doing wrong n right , will learn by practise i guess :-) I will totally try singing such numbers with more smoothness :-) Thanks a lot for encouragement :-) thanks a lot for listening n feedback :-)

> Krishnan Sir : Dear sir , its an honour for me that you have visited this place and given your time for listening n putting your views :-) … i have total respect for your words :-) i totally agree with you that i have that western style of singing which is making my hindi singing somewhat incomplete :-) i will listen to more hindi songs , try to adapt the harkats and modulations of hindi singing :-) Its so nice of you to say that ghazal rendered properly in my voice would sound superb :-) i’m flattered :-) thanks a lot of listening n feedback :-

> Ramya : Ok dear , will work on the expressions and do more practise . it may be a while but surely get you to say – this was your best performance :-) Thanks a lot for singing n feedback :-)

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George Kuruvilla Pro user said

Bro,
Not my department to critique :-) The experts have already spoken! One thing I felt was that it was not flowy (like Smitha pointed out). So at the very least, that needs to be fixed. Good luck on the next one man.

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Sumit Rai said

Lol George : you sound as if you have not sung any hindi number :-) … man you totally rock on hindi songs n you got more knowledge that most of us here :-). so … i wonder why you didn’t give more of your view’s :-) … will fix the the smoothness issue for sure :-) thanks a lot buddy for listening n feedback :-)

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Anirban said

Hey Sumit – Good try man…all points are already covered by others ….i liked it but you know it can be improved. Keep singing!!!

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Sumit Rai said

thanks anirban :-) … ya i’ll the above pointers in mind while i record the next one :-) … thanks a lot for listening n feedback:-)

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Tara Balakrishnan said

I felt timing has improved with this song. u can do lot better with little more effort:)

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks tara :-), i hope im getting better :-), will keep practicing and put more effort in future :-)thanks for the encouragement :-) Thanks for listening n feedback :-)

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Prem j Hans said

Hi Sumit! Nice try buddy… but that Soothing kinda feel in Ghazal, still missing :) ……nevah mind! that u’ll get it gradually for sure.Cheers to your effort.Keep up the good work.

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks for appreciating my attempt Prem :-) … ok gottya … will work on the soothing effect :-)Thanks for encouraging me :-) Thanks a lot for listening n feedback :-)

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Srividya Kasturi said

Nice attempt, Sumit…but could be a lot better. like others have pointed out, the singing is very controlled…not free flowing, maybe u were too conscious of the rhythm.
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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Srividya :-) … as others have pointed out i got a lot of work to do on my hindi singing :-) Sooner or later i will make it free flowing :-) … i’ll try not to get concious :-) Thanks a lot again for listening n feedback :-)

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Dhiraj Barla said

Good job Sumit, everything else has already been mentioned, i would suggest you to re-visit this song sometime later…. i am sure you will do better job. You got a nice voice.

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Dhiraj :-) man i’ve listened to your songs :-) you’re amazing :-) Will sure take care of the pointers given by all :-) sure will do this song again after i’m a little more fluent :-) Thanks for appreciating my voice :-) thanks a lot for listening n feedback :-)

Regards,
Sumit

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Vijay Iyer (away...) said

very nice try Sumit….I thought some parts were a little harshly down and too nasal for my liking ! This is a soft free flowing composition….I think softness and free flowing was a little missing….

Keep working man….You have potential.

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Shashank Gokhale said

More than the song, I really liked the honesty in your effort….

My stomach is full with that…. :D

Song, definately lot of scope to improve….

you can try softening your voice….it wud help for most of the hindi songs

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Sumit Rai said

Thanks Shashank :-) , i would try softening my voice in future :-) Thanks for appreciating my effort :-) I am practising and will try to improve :-) Thanks for listening n feedback :-)

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Sushil kumar Jain said

Hi Dear Sumit !!!
Me a new face for this beautiful website .
You performed to the best you could , i think !!! your voice is good !!! it has the magnetism…!!!!
This Ghazal i love too much !!! and sing also.
the problem i have that my voice is spoiled a lot because of heavy smoking…!!! as well free sites of karaoke i donot know….so if you want , i would sing in my own style of karaoke !!!! or may i get karaoke then with proper music….!!!!
you can listen my newly uploaded selfwritten song !!!


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