The skies Above the Ocean Blue--Original by Neil & jeevan..

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Hi friend’s….Again an Original Try from my side….Heard the tune from Neil’s page & thought of Venturing into it…….Wrote the lyric’s by self , have Tried to Incorporate the Title too in the lyric’s….One line Only……
& Tried to Blend the final lyric’s into the Tune………

Thought of Editing further….But After Hearing the Complete package……Two Hindi film song’s came into my mind,

Infact,It Resembled of two Already Done song’s in Hindi cinema……One is “Kaise Batayein kyun Tujhko chahein,Yaara Bata na paayein” from the film……“Ajab prem ki Gazab kahani….& One more Tune from the Hindi film…” Murder"…The tune Goes like this……" Bheege Hont tere,Pyaasa Dil mera……"….So….Thought of leaving it there Only….But ,wanted you All to Hear the Work,Which,I did without the least knowledge of these song’s at the Time of Making it…….

One more thing,Which Comes to mind,is……Either…the Above two mentioned song’s must have been Influenced by Some Original western nos….Maybe…. ….

Here,I want to present this Original Song by Neil & self…….All in Original sense…….Hope you like it…………

Do share your valuable Review’s……& Thank’s a lot……

The lyric’s….

Koi to Aake, chupke se kaanon mein,
Mere woh keh jaata……
(Somebody,Do Come & Whisper Something on my Ear’s,the thing’s which,I want to Hear…)

Koi to Aake,Haule se Dil mein jyoti jala jaataa……
( Somebody,Do come & Enlighten my Heart,Delicately)

Ai mere Dil …….Tu kahan hai…….(2)
( O My Own-Heart,Where are you,I am Searching for you….)

Koi to Aake Chupke se kaanon mein,
Mere woh keh jaata…
(Somebody,Do Come & Whisper Something on my
Ear’s,the thing’s which,I want to listen…)

Koi to Aaas jo,Dhundli si hai per,
Sacchhi woh kar jaata….
(Somebody,Do come & make it True,the Slightest Desire,which,I am having……)

Na jaane kyun……………MadhHoshiyaan hai………….
(I,Don’t know….Why this Intoxication is there within me….)

Humming……

Ambar jo neela hai,Saagar bhi neela hai,
Sama bhi pyaara hai……….(2)
( The sky & the Ocean is All Blue & the Atmosphere is So lovely….)

Aise mein Dilnashi……Tu kahan hai…………(2).
(In this climate & Condition ,where are you,my Sweet-Heart….)

lara lara lala ………(2)

Koi to Aake, chupke se kaanon mein,
Mere woh keh jaata……
Koi to Aake,Haule se Dil mein jyoti jala jaataa……
Ai mere Dil …….Tu kahan hai………
(Somebody,Do come & make it True,the Slightest Desire,which,I am having……)
( O My Own-Heart,Where are you,I am Searching for you….)

Comments

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Saroj Nair said

i was wondering what happened…
tried to post comment and didnt work…
nice team work Jivan and Neil…
very nice lyrics and well sung Jiva….
nice music Neil…well done both of you….

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Madhukar Mehta said

Jivan bhai and Neil:

Wow…… Great Team work and creative genius in both of you has flourished quite nicely!! Lovely tune and apt lyrics…… Jivan bhai, you have sung this melody so nicely!! Reminded me of Hemantda, Pankaj Mallick and such stalworts!! I admit, I have no such talents to either visualize or write…. If any thing, I would suggest to find some variations in singing for one or two of the antaras. L+F
Keep them coming…. You are on the roll!!
Madhukar
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Muzaffar Naqvi Pro user said

A good inspiration using Neil’s track Jivan. Enjoyed it very much….so soothing and restrain free music. Enjoyed the thoughts in your lyrics. Its a very good melody and we are so used to your powerful vocals. Why were you afraid to bring yourself more loud and upfront. Lovely work Jivan….must have been hard to write lyrics. Congratulations.

P.S: You reminded me of a small lyrics section “Kabhi Mere Saath koi Raat Guzar” by Kunal Gunjanwala in his song “Bheege Hont Tere”.

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

HI Jivan so beautifully done and wonderful
lyrics. can tell just how beautiful they r
sun the words…perhaps u can do a translation
also. of english on lyric section.
Very pleasing agree with comments. amazing
how music can inspire. oneself…great job
god bless goes to favs god bless NEIL

THANKS AGAIN . SO KIND OF U !
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Hema Shamal Pro user said

Wah,Jivan ji,lovely tune and so lively lyrics,super singing with powerful voice,great listen,wonderful collaboration.Enjoyed a lot.

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Harish Bhasin Pro user said

Jivan bhai, bahot sunder lyrics likhein hai, aasan nahin hota track par apne lyrics baithana. Gayeki tou aapki hamesha tareef e kabil hoti hai. Congratulations for your own song.
Keep singing,
Best wishes,
Harish
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Dj Wazif said

I had listened to Neil’s music before and now with your singing Jivan bhai…. wonderful work…. great team work here…. sang beautifully and music composed nicely…. keep sharing like that.

Wish you Gr8 Luck!

Please listen to my original here: Dekho Mausam

DJ WaziF

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

hi dj…. thanks so kindly . for the wonderful
thought s and comment…s.from the both of
us god bless NEIL/ JIVAN

ALSO THANK S HARISHHEMA
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Giri∂hαrαη. u. r. Pro user said

It’s a brilliantly composed song and you have added up to the beauty of Neil’s melodious tune by your marvellous singing Jivan.
Beautiful combination of melody and rhythm.
Congrats to both of you Jivan and Neil!
I admire your keen sense of music observation – especially in identifying songs of the same tune and so on.
(Unfortunately I am unable to comment on the lyrics as you have not given the English meaning! I am sure it should be an awesome lyric too.)
Kind regards,
Giri.

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Saroj’ji……Many thank’s for the listen & Encouragement….Sometimes…Opening of the same page,Simultaneously by 2-3 friend’s……Causes that problem…….Thank’s Again….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Madhukar’ji….So very thankful for your lovely Comment’s….Actually,have been singing on Club’s & stages for Quite some time now,As a Hobby-passion….So have to Accumulate,All type of song’s….And Approximately 1000 & more…Of All singer’s of Hindi film Song’s ,I have written on a Book for performing……Maybe….This has Generated Some-what,that Writing Creation in me………Other-wise,Naturally,There has never been an Inclination in me to write Any song or Even a short poem…….

Thank’s a lot for All Encouragement…….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Muzaffar’ji….So Aptly mentioned by You….And,I myself was thinking About it……This version,which,I have uploaded,was a Trial version for my-self to Gauge the Over-All Out-put of this Tune with lyric’s……

And,I Did wanted to Put some more Thrust & More variation on the Singing……But,After Hearing this Trial-version…….I realised it to be Resembling a lot with the Already Created Song’s……So,Didn’t feel it All that necessary to Edit it further…….But,I Desperately wanted ,All you friend’s to Hear this Original Creation….So,just instinctly uploaded this Raw-Version Only………….

Maybe in future,….will surely Experiment further……

Thank’s Again for So correctly judging & Appreciation of this Creative Out-let…….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Hema’ji….So very thankful for ,Alway’s being supportive & listening to my Musical Out-let’s….Thank’s Again….Tc……

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Harish’ji….Thank’s sir for So constructive feed-back…Mean’s a lot to Us……Yes….Fitting in the Lyric’s on a Tune is Difficult…As,lot of Take’s,Re-takes need’s to be Done to Match with the Beat’s in All it’s sense….Thank’s Again sir for Recognizing the Effort….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Wazif-Bhai….Bahut shukriya for Your valuable feed-back….Mean’s a lot to Us……thank’s Again….

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♪♪♪ praveen Pandit ♪♪♪ said

Hi Jivan bhai, Very nice composition once again!!lovely singing…Lyrics bhi achhi thi….Kudos to you guyz…yeh composition sunker main do do gana gun gunane laga…ek shuruwat ka tune isse milta julta hai….ek toh yeh Kaise bataayien… aur dusra Naqviji ne kaha…overall a great effort!!Goes to Fav!!
Thanks and Regards,
Praveen
Pls check my latest upload
Dil Ki Tanhaayi Ko

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Giri-Bhai….Your lavish feed-back & Rich word’s, Do Boost Our Confidence in All senses….

One secret….The Identification of the same tune was partly Done by my Better-Half….I was Really Amazed by that,Had a least knowledge about it Initially….

I have Added the English meaning to the lyric’s….Do Check in your Spare time…Thank’s Again….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Neil,I am so Gratefull to you,For Allowing me to sing On your Cover-Tune…….

I have Added the English meaning to the lyric’s….Do Check in your Spare time…Thank’s Again….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Praveen-Bhai….Aapne Bilkul sahi Farmaya hai….Mujhe bhi,Isska Aabhaas Baadmein Huwa….jab Tune ko sunn-kar….Humming kar Raha thaa…tabhi….Bilkul Dhyaan bhi Nahi Aaya….Ki Aisa Kuch Ban Raha hai……….Thank’s Again for All your Encouragement & lovely feed-back……

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Giri∂hαrαη. u. r. Pro user said

Wow… Thanks for the English Translation.
Rich imaginative lines indeed!
You are not only an accomplished singer, but there is also a talented poet ready to take off from your heart!
Please let him out fully Jivan…
Kind regards,
Giri.

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

HI GIRI AND JIVAN….thanksk all for the kind
comments andalso the great english translation
u surely will b a poet in the future. and writing ur own lyics. also god bless NEIL
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Thinkal govind kumar Pro user said

Jivan & Neil………
Great creativity & outstanding collaborative effort !
Lovely composition by Neil , meaningful lyrics, great voice & awesome rendition in Jivan’s great voice with soothing feel !
LOOOOVED this to the core & added to FAVOURITES !
Standing ovation to both of your good selves !
Thanks a lot for sharing this very special one !
GOD Bless !
Loving Best Wishes,
Thinkal Govind Kumar.

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

mr Kumar very gracious thoughts by u .
sincerelya ppreciated….by bothof u s .
god bless NEILJIVAN
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Chandrasekharan Nair(always with music) Pro user said

Great composition by Neil and equally nice blending of lyrics and singing with it by Jivan. I felt that the second anthara(charanam) could have been changed to high notes along with the chords used by Neil. But this is also sweet to listen, just said my openion only.Keep on creation of new songs.
Much regards
Chandran
Be always with a music mind to be a good person

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Hi Chandrasekharan’ji….So True,You are with your Opinion……I had the Same Idea….But,I have mentioned in Detail,Above,to Naqwi-saahab
& in my narrative’s too……That’s the Reason,I Held up my self….But would surely,Accomplish that in the Future ventures….

Thank’s Again,For your Wonderful feed-back….

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Ramesh Tadi (away...) Pro user said

Neil and Jivan…

wonderful composition and team work by both of you… nice to see one more collab of u guys… enjoyed the tune and soothing take… keep them coming…
Ramesh Tadi

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Latha Ganti Pro user said

Neil and Jivan ji – Excellent Collaboration
Jivan ji – Beautiful creative work & rendition loved it

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Harshan Nambiar Pro user said

Jivan bhai……very creative stuff……anything creative and original is 100 times better than a wonderful cover:) very pleasant singing….your vocals really sounded great with the ambience of the ktrack……nice lyrics as well….to my favs !!!
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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Ramesh-Bhai….Thank’s for your wonderfull Review on my Original take………

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s latha’ji….For All the Encouragement….Alway’s….All Best wishes….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Harshan-Bhai….For Understanding & Appreciating the True value of an Original Take….Really,It Alway’s Gives an In- explicable High on Any Such ventures……Thank’s Again……

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

hi all and i totally agree with all comments
especially that originals are better than
covers so true… that is whyi stopped doing
covers…may do a few this year for a change
of pace. but will always do my own composing
thanks all god bless NEIL AND JIVAN
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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

tHANKS SO KINDLY SRINivasan … for ur
kind thoughts and words. gratefull appreciated
NEIL /JIVAN GOD BLESS TO ALL!
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Hemanth Kumar Pro user said

Splendid, Jivan bro :-)…. Total creativity…. watch out, some music director might lift your (& Neil’s) work and make a Bollywood super hit out of it someday :-)….!!

Neil ji, You seem to have tremendous passion into all this. Would love to follow your participation.

Thank you both & warm regards,

Hemanth

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Hemanth-Bhai……Such a Feed-back, Can Only take us Both to the Skies Above …….Kaash,ye Sach Ho jaata…….But,I am very Happy Sharing Such small-small Expression’s Also with you All friend’s….It is a Real High in itself….Thank’s Again….

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Hemanth Kumar Pro user said

Pleasure is all ours, Jivan bro :-)! Thank you both once again…. great work indeed….

Kind regards,

Hemanth

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>>mushy<<- said

very nice jivan bhai Neils experiments have been done my many singers… very nicely done….
liked ur voice….
take care
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Harry Chops said

Jivan bhai & Neil- Wonderful effort guys. Start is quite similar to ’Tu jaane na". Loved the composition and vocals very much. Lovely vibratos. My fav
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Nirmala Kp said

jivan and neil ,nice singing.

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

HI HARRY AND NIRMALA AND MR KHAN , THANKS
SO KINDLY FOR THE PRECIOUIS COMMENTS.
FROM THE BOTH OF US. glad to see my music
heading toward influencing eastern singers/
thats what we want . i always said an east
meet s west fusion s will b popuar . god
bless NEIL JIVAN
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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Mushtaque’ji….For the listen & liking the Attempt….

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Harry-Bhai….Yes,After Hearing the Final Recording,I too sensed it….Loved your Apt Review….

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Bijayashree ( listening & enjoying all your tracks) Samal said

Dear Jivan ji
Very creative. Love the way you ve sung Madhoshiyan. Very soothing:)

best,
Shree

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Sudha Kumar said

Awesome creative collaboration, Neil and Jivan ji. Very hummable tune, and pleasant lyrics, and lovely singing, Jivan ji. I too loved Madhoshiyan! yes, noticed the unplanned similarity with Bheege Honth Tere, and Tu Jaane Na, goes to show what a great creative mind you have, Jivanji. Liked it!
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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s sudha’ji …So much for your Valuable Review & Liking the Effort……Great pleasure From Both of Us to have you in Our page……

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Adwait Ranade Pro user said

Wow!
Jeevan Bhai, salute to your creative talent and marvelous singing, Bro! Can’t decide what I enjoyed more….Your singing or lyrics or Neil’s superb track! In other words well done in all the departments :)
The sustain at end of tu kahan hai touches the soul!
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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Adwait’ji for the Great Review & lovely feed-back….Mean’s a lot to Us….Gives us a spirit to Continue with Our Effort’s….
God Bless….

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Neil swanson.. Serious fall again .black out. neck surgery coming in 2 wks prayers requested thanks neil Pro user said

HI JIVAN . AND ALL THANKS SO KINDLY FOR THE
PRECious comments. very well appreciated.
and grateful…jivan we must do more togeter
we can b an east meets west fusion songwriting
team…god bless NEIL
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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Adina soooo much,Alway’s Appreciate your presence on my stage…Tc & All the Best….

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Deep Dobhal said

Jivan da aap to bahut achhe Lekhwaar bhi hain, kya baat hai…bahut achha likha hai aur gaate to aap achha hai hi….original kya hai kisi geet ka instrumental hai ya Neil ka khud ka hai….jo kuch bhi hai aapka kaam sarahneeya hai…is tarah se aatma ko aanand milta hai aur aap bahut achha anubhav karte hain…aur jab gaane waala pyaar bhar deta hai to wo sun’ne wale ko bhi pyara lagta hai…cover gaane se kahin achha hai ye…aisa mujhe lagta hai….
Deep Dobhal

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Jivan Kohli (will be away for long--other commitment's..--busy on a learning mode---) said

Thank’s Deep-Bhai….Aapko Dekh kar Humesha Ek khushi Hoti hai…Aur Aapke Vichaar bhi Acche lagte hain….Ek Koshish Rehti hai….Bus Sangeet ke Saath jude Rehni ki….

Baki ,Aap logon ki Feed-back se Ek naya Hausla,Kuch Accha karne ki,Milti Rehti hai……Thank’s Again,Mushrufiyat mein bhi samay Nikalne ke liye……Tc & All the Best……


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