naseem-e- subah... (Original)

Lyrics & Chords

Fell in love with the music when Nandu sent it to me first…. Fell in love with it more when Sajeev wrote the Lyrics to it…. Credit goes to Sajeev for identifying the theme for this one…. it is unlike anything we have done before…. Thanks Sajeev, your lyrics took this song to a new plane…. Nandu’s final music beautifully augments the feel of the words…. I only hope in the midst of all these i have done justice to the words and the music…. We are looking forward to your comments for this one…. Btw, the song is questioning the rationale behind terrorism….

तू / न यूं / अश्क बहा,
ऐ / नसीमे सुब्हा,
वो / वहाँ / उठा धुवाँ,
जला / कोई आशियाँ….
कल जहाँ हँसते थे फूल,
उजड़ गया वो जहाँ,
वहशियत इंसान की,
पी गयी बस्तियां….

कौन यहाँ, तेरा है आशना,
कौन यहाँ, तेरा है आइना ….

मासूमियत,
बचपन में नहीं,
इंसानियत,
खो गयी है कहीं,
निर्दोष रूहें,
चीखती रह गयीं,
शाखे दरख़्त,
कांपती रह गयी……
एक धमाका हुआ,
कैसा धोखा हुआ,
सब बदल क्यों गया,
जो था देखा हुआ….

Lyrics: “Sajeev Sarathie”:http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100000379853337
Music: Nandu
Ramesh: vocals

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Harry Chops said

Wow! Very nice composition, nice lyrics and great singing. Straight to my favs.
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Bcuber said

Thanks Harry! Glad you liked it man…. :)
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Babu Nm said

t be frank man u are “awesome”
to my favorites…….
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Anup said

awesome job Nandu and Ramesh….enjoyed it…

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Harshan Nambiar - (busy till end of this week) Pro user said

Nandu and Ramesh ….very beautifully done….everything the lyrics, composition and vocals were outstanding ….I just realized that we arent “friends” as yet:-)…sent u the request.
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Roshine Gnanatharshan. said

Amazing !!
Awesome !!
Absolutely Perfect !!!!
And I loved it !
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Raj kumar Anjan Pro user said

Sounds different…. Welcome back Ramesh…. Stupendous effort and it paid off well…. Whenever you come back, you come with an original song…. Enjoyed this, as well…. Awesome team work….
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Bcuber said

Thanks Raj…. its been tough to get to sing with a new born at home :)!
Thanks Srividya!
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Jay Krishnan said

Nandu/Ramesh/Sajeev…great work guys. I loved it.

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Srinivas Panda said

good one overally.
but i felt the music arrangement could have been more groovy at places and the mixing would be a lil better.

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Bcuber said

Thank you so much Harry. I normally do the vocals offline, and then ship it to Nandu for mixing/mastering/arrangement/composition etc.
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Thank you Jay! I’m glad you took a few minutes to listen and comment… I need to do a longevity test to see if I listen to it over a longer period of time, does it still have a good melody etc?
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Thank you Meera! Hope there was not too many accent issues… Sajeev’s lyrics were very apt.
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Thanks Srinivas, I appreciate the honest feedback. Needed that. The grooves are intentionally off and incomplete in places to give the feel of disturbance… hope that makes sense… On the other hand, I agree, at the end of the day, this is a song and it needs to be complete. I’ll take your feedback.
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Tu na yun ashk baha : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

Murali

Murali Venkatraman said

Nandu:

I have always been a fan of your mixes. It sounds really great. Loved the base !

Ramesh:

There is no second opinion about your soulfulness, clear rendition and versatility. But working with such tough lyrics, I suggest that you double check the pronunciation. For example, words like वहशियत need to come a bit clearer. And cutting the words like maasomiyat into two distinct portions ain’t sounding pleasant. insaaniyat “kho” gayi and not ko gayi. I could not figure out whether you said “shaam ke” or “shaakhe” and darkhat – once again needs to be said clearly. Admittedly you have come a long way from the hum-dum days, but such tough urdu words need to be worked upon more. The best bet for this is the lyricist himself. I would recommend sitting with sajeev, asking him to “say” or read the lyrics out and you imbibe the words from how he says it. This will help you a long way.

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Tara Balakrishnan said

awesome team effort!
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Rishi S said

Dude……sounds cool! Nice composition too……given that it was tuned first, appreciate sajeev for picking the right theme….the lyrics could have easily turned the song into a “frustration in love” song…….very smart choice! Great team work!

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Bcuber said

Thank you Murali for the detailed comments. Well appreciated. Actually Sajeev did point out some flaws in my pronounciation, and I promised I’d do another recording when I get back from vacation. I did go through a few iterations of fixing pronounciations and getting agreement with Sajeev in the earlier stages of production. However our schedules were so different that we did not get a chance to iterate more toward the final parts of the recording. Glad you liked the song.
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Naseem e’ subah : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Thanks Yo Rishi!. Appreciate the feedback. Got a point there regarding alternate lyrics. We’ll do another mix sometime later with no sound effects in the background.
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Naseem e’ subah : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Somya, glad you listened to the number even though you did not understand the words and took a few minutes to put some feedback!
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Naseem e’ subah : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Satish Vammi said

Ramesh, this is a good one man….loved the feel in your voice… composition is good and fresh….good use of sfx but at some places dominated the vocal….actually the tune can have a alternate feel with different background….overall very well presented….greetings to Nandu and Sajeev.
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Bala (composer/producer) said

This is good :) The sounds to get the background are not overused (which is not the case for these type of songs mostly….) – I liked that. When hitting the chorus parts only the bass and beats are visible…. I think the other instruments should also cut through to make it powerful! Nice job Ramesh, your voice control is good… Good job by Sajeev…

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Bcuber said

Thank You Satish! It was sort of a challenge to moderately use the FX and still keep the feel of the song… especially in the bombing sequences… where it is very loud muddy sound… so the song had a glitch creeping through. Glad you liked it!
Please listen to my latest uploads:
Naseem e’ subah : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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Bcuber said

Always good to hear feedback from another composer. Technical feedback is good any day. Yep good observation on the choruses…. the other instruments did not cut through well.

Not sure what you think of my other original which we (nandu and I) are very proud of as a decent composition.

http://www.muziboo.com/muzibooram/music/idhu-varai-yen-vaazhkai-original/

Please listen to my latest uploads:
Naseem e’ subah : Hindi Original
Yaaham: A Tamil original melody
Teri Chahat: A Sufi Original
Ennavale: Kadhalan

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