A boys decision after Love failure

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A boy comes home sadly after being rejected by his girl friend. He tries to be positive…. But could not face his defeat. Comes home… Cries to his heart’s content. Tries to talk to a friend and let out. But cuts the call halfway. His mind is very unclear. He could not focus. Wavers a lot. Writes down a letter about his committing suicide. then tares the letter and decides otherwise….But could not stay positive any longer…Goes to his room trying to pacify himself.

You will know the result at the end

Please comment and share your views. Thanks in advance.

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Neil swanson.. Inactive for now medical reason ! Pro user said

HI . simply beautiful. strings sounded super
nice with that slight verb in the strigs…
forget what they call them . stacatto…??
either way very well executed great job
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Neil swanson.. Inactive for now medical reason ! Pro user said

JUST having some fun on post…but again truly
an honor . look forward to more with u let
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Raja Mohamed.j. said

Good effort for symbony……its tuchable composition.veri nice…Srimathi…
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Saroj Nair said

very nice imagination Srimathy, very good composition :)

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Tha Kathir bye bye my dearest ppl forever said

Great imagination.

Good to listen.

Keep it up dear Srimathy.
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Khawer Khilji Pro user said

Nice work Srimathy ji-Liked it very much.

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Jaya Ganapathy said

Hai Srimathy,
Nice composition!
Felt the pain of Heart, Mind & Soul!!
God Bless you!!!
Jaya

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Jithu Karthik said

Hey this is something totally different.
Amazing… Good one…

A little of base sound (or a base cello tone) wold have added more color to this. Just a suggestion … :)

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Swati Prasad said

very very beautiful composition :)
Swati Prasad

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Sudha Kumar (on a break) said

Hi Srimathi,
Very nice strings… liked it, did give the feeling of anguish, like someone was pacing back and forth, the sharp crescendo in the end would lead one to feel that he does indeed commit suicide, or something like goes completely mad…


“A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. "
- Nelson Mandela

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Theagaraj Dhanapalan (busy will be back soon) said

Sagothari….Ippothu thaan padithen,,Mugavariyai….thamathathirku….varunthugiren…….ungalin karpanai valathirkum….athai isaiyil olivadivam koduthu….uyeerottamum thara ninaipathu….nalla vishayame……indru nitchayam ketkiren….ketkum aavalil ullen….

Varugiren…Nal vaazthukkal
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Swamy Kitcha said

I already commented on FB. Good one Srimathy. I think the effect of the theme was there but it’s sounding dry. Probably you could have had a mild backing track with pads to give it a full texture. or some strings in the bass range could have also helped. JMHO.

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Hema Shamal (away for a while) said

Very good composition,liked it.

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Theagaraj Dhanapalan (busy will be back soon) said

Nandraga ondri pogirathu……Athaiye oru manathai thetri thelivu piranthaaal….eppadi endru aaakki irunthaaal….innum nandraga irukkum…endrum nianikiren……

Good one ….

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Ramesh Tadi (starting fresh!!) said

Srimathy ji… nice write-up/description to start with and great imagination and composition… i am sure with more guidance and suggestions you will come up with more of these… liked it.
Ramesh Tadi

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Harshan Nambiar - (busy till end of this week) Pro user said

Nice creation srmiathy….on a lighter note , the boy gets rid of the letter and then goes inside his room…logs on to his computer and sends an email instead of his suicide….and then he hangs himself on the fan. The sound of the ending shriek….wakes him up from deep slumber….he smiles…and brushes this nightmare away :)
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Prahalad r said

Very gud one Srimathy…… Loved the write up, and a nice job on the keyboard as well…Gud one Harshan :D


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