Dil Ke Jharokhe Me Tujhko Bithakar

D.j. Wazif (busy away) said

Great selection Ashish and one of Mohammad Rafi’s toughest song and even attempting such a song itself requires lot of courage so congrats on attempting it and it was a wonderful listen…. just address your diction and modulation a bit especially on “karr” all along…. otherwise great rendition. Keep sharing like that.

Best of Luck!!!
WaziF

Harshan (away) Nambiar said

Hi Ashish…thanks for your scribble ,…this is one of my most favs of rafi saab and I also have attempted this 2 years ago…and it also had mistakes. Good attempt pitching was good for the most part….there are certain things in this song which can be improved…first is expression of passion….and secondly the high notes and the transition from high to low… but a brave attempt….keep it up. Diction and other things comes next ….first is sur, taal and expressions….even if we hum this song without using words….it should reach the audience….hai ki nahi. ….liked your attempt…but felt it could be better.
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Nikita Daharwal said

liked your rendition….Keep singing Ashish ji….Best wishes

Muzaffar Naqvi said

Late hogaya iss bar laikin itna yadgar sunkar dil khush hogaya. Kaisqa ajeeb complicated geet hai ya tu itna nicha ya aik dum itna ooper….Rafi Sahab ka gala tha jo ye sub itni khoobsurti se ga gaya. Tumhari attempt dileraana thi bohut kam isko try karein shayad.

Radhakrishnan Nair said

Good attempt Ashish. Problem areas have already been discussed above so not going there. Liked your attempt. Keep singing!

Cheers
Rk

Rahul (getting back to routine) said

Good job Ashish and I am sure with expert feedback from Sree (Harshan) above, you will be able to target the problem areas and improve upon. Good luck.

Liked ur honest effort though:)

“Coming together is a beginning, staying together is progress, and working together is success” – Henry Ford

Loknath Mishra said

nice bro …like it…good job.
u hv a good talent, this is one of very high pitch song from Rafi saab with great feel …
this is itself a gr8 thing that u tried it…
a lot of energy needs …
best of luck

Latha Ganti said

Very nice singing Ashish.

Praveen Pandit said

Hi Ashish bhai, very good attempt of this toughest song…liked your efforts. Keep singing and sharing.
Thanks and Regards,
Praveen

Dr sridhar saxena said

I am glad to see that you are attempting a variety of singers….This is also one of the most popular numbers of Rfai sahab I liked ur rendition……some of the pointers are given above….but I liked ur honest singing and therefore it goes to my favs…keep it up
Dr.Sridhar Saxena

Kala Vijay(indefinitely away) said

nice singing of this evergreen song Ashish.
sorry for being late here as there were a lot of mails.

Srini S (bye bye friends) said

Good try ashish and thanks for the scribble.By singing more songs,you will make it.Many have pointed out the mistakes upstairs.Please follow it.Goodluck and keep singing.

My latest uploads:

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Shaniruh said

Nice attempt Ashish ……liked ur efforts , keep it up :)

Saroj Nair said

good attempt Ashish, very tough song

‘Sing like there’s nobody listening,
And live like it’s heaven on earth.’
-William W. Purkey

Mushtaque ( mushy) away 4a week said

very nice attempt of a very lovely song …. keep it up
Music has no country, no religion , Its Universal

Gautam Parekh said

Hi Ashish brother….sorry for late commenting….And thanks for inform……
This is a very tough song for singing,,,Khas karke is ke high notes….Aur is me jo utaar-chadav hai wo kaafi mehnat se hansil ho sakte hai….I agree with all improvement aria for you….Doston ne kaha hi hai….Keep work on it….
I also upload the same version a 1 month ago….
Thanks….Liked your effort….

Ok! i change my opinion i stay for my friends. said

salaam dear Ashish ji bhai jaan
i apologize for late reply dear i’am not active in here because i don’t understand the sistem of sharing and none told me how to check the link in here so i can’t share my songs….in my opinion the important is you if you feel satisfaction while singing what you love then that is the point…you’ve sung with good feel and nostalgic one just like in original….keep up the good work and thank you for inviting me it’s my honour and pleasure pls welcome to check my rafis qawali song hum kisise kum nahin,hope u will like it GOD bless u n family
best
regards
tahy

Jaishree said

Hi Ashish, Thanks for your scribble. Could not get here any earlier than this. :)…Superb song pick. Good attempt Ashish. Please follow the experts’ comments here and am sure you can get much better. :) Good Luck!

Dr. priya Rajan said

Dear Ashih… Thanks for the scribble
Nice song selection, my fav’’’’Sad or Happy time…. KK’s Voice gives the boost….
Acha hein…. Mixing needs care, voice is drowned, pump in little more feel to rock the show… Not an easy go….Liked it.
Thanks for sharing
MUSIC is the language of the soul!

Sekharji47 Nair said

Hi Ashish, Nice singing of the song. It is a
very difficult song. But you attempted well.Some lyrics mistakes are occured. You can improve it by singing the same song more and more time. Keep singing more such songs of Rafisahib. Also try to listen my upload also here.
Regards
Chandran(sekharji47)

Priya B said

Nice singing Ashish …. cheers :D