unnai allaal ( revised own composition )
unnai allaal ( revised own ... Lyrics & Chords
revised the vocals from the last time as the comments alarmed my vocals …….I know I am not still perfect ………. Please do comment about lyrics and composition and arrangements too….as this is own composition and does deserve more comments than just the vocals in a karaoke song,as original compositions goes through lot of work from scratch….so please be open to all other areas of the song too….thanks for improving my abilities through your comments.Info
by Maruthi
December 06, 2008
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Krishnan N v said
Maruthi….
As said earlier the composition is just awesome…
Vocals are much better now. “sirikkum pozhuthu…” sangati could be more clearer…I felt the vocals were low at some places. There were some off pitch notes too…
But overall very soothing…
N V K
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Ravi S said
Heart warming rendition….
Thinkal govind kumar
said
My Dear Maruthi,
This time, you’ve done it dear friend.
Wow ! What a creative work !
Beautiful lyrics, soothing composition using apt orchestration & excellent rendition in your melodious voice ! I really loved it.
Hearty Congrats ! You are a real all-rounder.
Fulll marks from me.Keep it up !
GOD Bless !
Loving Best Wishes,
Thinkal Govind Kumar.
Kumar Srinivasan
said
Sounds very good Maruthi. I am not qualified to comment on the intricacies of orchestration, but can tell you the song sounded pleasing and find myself humming the tune already. Keep up the good work.
-Kumar.
Maruthi said
Hi Subbu, Basically this track is a super fast composition of mine. I am happy it filled your ears soothingly. The sense of this song is a longing husband thinks of his wife while she is away from him…….so intha jeevan romba paavam……is there because the previous lines say ….mazhai thoovum muzhu megam , malai melae pani thuvum, inlangatrum ennai vaattum…….so all these are cold , in need of the warmth he says intha jeevan romba paavam in a naughty and take it easy way…….so the expression is of classical mood ………the analysis of the musical expresion is done before i sang that part. Its good it appealed to you I was doing something different there.thanks,
Maruthi
Maruthi said
comments on previous versionThinkal Govind kumar said
My Dear Maruthi,
Good creative work ! Certain pitching issues in rendition to be taken care of. Can you please rework this so as to make it perfect ?
GOD Bless !
Loving Best Wishes,
Thinkal Govind Kumar.
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Adithi Devarajan said
Nice Maruthi! Liked the tune. Sounds a lot like “Theendaai” in many places. As Govind said, you should redo the vocals and repost.
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Maruthi Nambi said
Adithi and TGK I agree both of your comments I ddnt even practice the song actually to get it correct on my throat I was thinking the lyrics aside and trying to fit in different phrases…as it felt write I just hit the record button…honestly i didnt even wrote the lyrics on the paper I just sang it as it flow into me
Though the tune sounds like theendai this tune falls in garahrapriya and or also Kanada and other related and onrelated ragaas…. Could we call this a Misra kanada….or miserable kanada ?
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Murali Venkatraman said
Hi Maruthi,
This is a beautiful tune not very well rendered. I would suggest you don’t try to “frame” it as being in a raagam. To me it sounds more like megh-malhar (which has this unusual quality of sounding like kanada in some part and like desh in the others. I did not really get a theeNdaai feel except for the similar percussion employed. Violins sound midi-ish and need more depth. Percussion too. Other instruments sound fine.
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Murali Venkatraman said
But it reminded me of a composition by Ganesh sung by me in blogswara 1. The song name is alaikadal vizigaLil naana. BLS is currently being reconstructed. you can chekc it out once it is up.
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Maruthi Nambi said
Murali nice to see you back here,
I will sure redoo this song when time permits me…. yes I think you got it closer on the raaga …but when I used both the nishadams it sounded so nice and thats where its confusing me….this is a cinema kind of melody so i will skip that ragaa based thought…lol
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George Kuruvilla said
The composition is really good Maruthi. As others have mentioned, you should definitely redo the vocals. Did you use some sort of pitch correction in this? The vocals sound synthesized at certain places.
-George
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Krishnan N v said
Maruthi…
Very good composition. Really an exceptional tune. Not repeating what all have said about singing.
Good that you are planning to redo it,…I felt you were not too sure about the composition of certain “sangati”s . The clarity was lacking a bit …
Looking forward to your revised one…
N V K
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Sushane Shankar said
Great job bro……
Sushane
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Kumar Srinivasan said
Maruthi,
Very nice composition. Why not spend more time to make it perfect from a pitching stand point. Tune is catchy. Look forward to more tunes from your bank :-).
-Kumar.
Harshan (away) Nambiar
said
Maruthi ….excellent composition ….your vocals sound very refreshing ….nice soothing piece of work ….The only thing which I didnt like much was the strings playing in the first anthra…it took some beauty off ….could have had another instrument like flute….again just some of my observations ….not at all an expert in this arena.
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Rashmi Nair
said
Very soothing tune maruthi. Very impressive. Expressive singing as well. Looking fwrd to more from you.
Rashmi
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Sriram Srinivasan said
Maruthi,
I am commenting on the tune only at this time.
Pallavi started well upto the 2 nd line, 3rd line (Azhago Azhagu) became redundant instead of transcending to the next level. Pallavi sounded incomplete. You can take advantage of the good start by reworking on the 3 line and go upto may be 6 lines before coming back to line one in the pallavi.
Charams were definitely better.
-sriram
Panchabaanan said
Maruthi….It was a very soothing Composition….Wonderful Job….Just Loved your arrangements and singing….
I really appreciate your hard work….Expecting more from you….All the very best
P♣B
Sushane Shankar said
love d tune……… i dont know much abt d arrangements to comment……. i liked it though……… grear job bro………
cheerz
Sushane
George Kuruvilla
said
Much better Maruthi. Very soothing composition. I cant follow the lyrics, so wont comment. The singing is much in this version. I agree with Jay to some extent about the tones being a little too harsh. But thats part of the learning process I guess. Really commendable!
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Tara Balakrishnan said
very nicely done Maruthi. loved the first interlude better… felt the second one cud havebeen longer… the flow was beautiful!!
Kumaran said
This is wonderfully done, Maruthi. Felt you could have limited those echos in charanams to only where necessary. Overall, very soothing composition!!!!
Roshini said
good composition and expressive vocals. somehow i felt the pallavi was incomplete as it ends abruptly. maybe you can add the first two lines of the pallavi again if you dont want to add anything new. guess we all are spoiled by the usual style of listening to the pallavi twice in the beginning :)
i like the aalap which concludes the song, very thoughtful.
Best Regards,
Rosh
Sudhathee Sriram said
Strangely i also was reminded of “Theendai”….maybe its the style that i am relating to….:)
I agree that the singing sounded amateurish in some places….but i am not complaining about….
i have listened to this 3 times in a stretch already…the tune is so beautiful….the 2nd interlude is amazing…i dont like "azhago azhagu "…it seems like taking the same tune of the previous line…
btw….is this a solo or a duet?i would have loved it to be duet…dunno if the lyrics are meant for that anyway!
Shyam Mohan said
Hi Maruti Sir,
Superb…………I really enjoyed this song very much…………keep posting more songs………
Cheers,
Shyam Mohan
Shailender (trying to be regular)
said
Maruti,
Am amazed at your composition………the music was very good, singing was soothing too, despite the fact that I don’t understand the words…….
keep it up………
shailender
Natesh Murthi said
mams…….
u rocking !!!!
rhytm was very nice i enjoyed it lot…….
expecting more from u !!!!
Murthi
Dhiraj Barla said
hey Maruthi,
Composition was brilliant, agree with upstairs on the infulence on A.R.R, but u have done good job with the tune and i like the vocal too…. way to go man…. keep up the good work.
Shanker Bharadwaj said
wonderful bro! Simply loved it! Also, cool vocals!
Cheers,
Shanker Bharadwaj
Ramya Harish said
Hey Maruthi, liked it a lot. Very nice tune. A Lot like theendai, probably sri ragam dominates. Enjoyed it.
Cheers:)
Ramya
Bala (composer/producer) said
Very catchy tune. Sounds very refreshing to the ears. I like your mixing. You have done a wonderful job. Would love to see a final version with two saranams….
Please listen to my first post on muziboo…. would appreciate your comments!
Aariraro – Original composition with vidya
Yuvaraj said
Hello Maruthi!
Great to hear, good lyrics…. all the best for your future….
Srimathy (not active ) Rajagopalan said
good one Maruthi….
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