My brother's composition;My lyrics

Ronak R. said

I like the theme… and effects you’ve tried to weave around. Which language is this?? Not familiar with it, but the vocals shall sound better with a little bit of studio reverb effect. A bit reverb on master should go really cool.

I’m still not satisfied with the beats. They dont sound clean and solid enough. Lot of issues… arrangements, velocity, spectrum (dB) and the compression are special issues that need to be dealt with on percs.

Its really a full-fledged song… and the plucked notes in the middle are good… but not the way they sound. Try to replace the core elements or assign seperate mixing to each, taking care of the isssues I just mentioned.

What all do you use for composition? Will help me to help you better.

~ Ronak R. / RokZRooM

Music – My Beloved Obsession!